Hallo, ich habe morgen eine mündliche Prüfung in Englisch. Könntet ihr bitte meinen Text korrigieren?

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Was mir direkt auffällt ist, dass Du iam schreibst. Das gibt es nicht. Entweder heißt es I am oder die gekürzte Variante = I'm. Außerdem wird I = Ich im Englischen immer groß geschrieben.

Dann verstehe ich nicht, wieso Du manche Wörter wie beispielsweise talk, live, play usw. groß schreibst. Das sind Verben, welche klein geschrieben werden. Des Weiteren schreibt man beispielsweise big house auch klein.

Danke, aber darauf habe ich nicht geachtet da es auf die Aussprache ankommt mh aber hast du andere Verbesserungsvorschlag-Vorschläge ?

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@dressblack

Ich dachte, dass dich auch die schriftlichen Fehler interessieren. Bezüglich des Inhalts wartest Du besser mal auf einen von den Experten für Englisch.

,, i want to do my a levels After my a Levels i think i would like to work in a Bank or so but I don't exactly now."

Der Teil ergibt meiner Ansicht nach keinen Sinn.

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Hello my name is *, I am 16 years old and I want to talk about my future Plans. After my successful graduation I want to do my A levels, then I think I would like to work in a bank, but I don't now yet.

Du musst unbedingt auf deine Groß- und Kleinschreibung achten, sowie solltest du Wiederholungen wie "and" und "after" vermeiden.

Danke:)

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@xLukas123

Oh mist, ja natürlich meinte ich das. Danke schön!

Hatte das von oben einfach übernommen, ohne nochmals zu korrigieren.

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When I am about 25 years old, I want to marry the woman love and live with her in a big house with two or three children. Because I like football, I would like to play football in a club in future. Furthermore I would like to do a trip around the world.

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Hello my name is ****** and iam 16 years old, i want to Talk about my Future-Plans. After my graduation i want to do my a levels.After that i think i would like to work at a Bank but I`m not so sure. When iam 25 years old i want to marry a Woman, Live with her in a Big House and have 2 or 3 children. If i have enough Time i would like to Play Football in a club. if all goes well , I 'd like travel around the world.


Hoffe es hilft dir, hab jetzt nicht alles korrigiert wie im oder das du machen groß schreibst 

Danke ja hilft mir, aber hast du noch Vorschläge was ich dazu schreiben könnte ?:)

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@dressblack

hmm diese Prüfung hab ich ja diese Jahr auch noch *_*. Andere jobs, mehr Hobbys etc..... Aber es geht da hauptsächlich um die Diskussion 

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Oh Gott hab mir grad mein Kommentar durchgelesen, was für einen Mist meine Autokorrektur gemacht hat, aua.

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Wie findet ihr den About me Text?

Hello my name is Musterman and I want to tell you something about me. I'm 14 years old. I was born on the tweenty three July 2001. I can speak German, Turkish, French and English. I live with my mum, my aunt and my little brother. My mothers name is Musterfrau. She works as a beautician. My aunts Name is Musterfrau she works as a hairdresser. She has her own hairdressing salon. My little brother is ten years old. He goes to the Thiebaubtschool. He is in grade 4. This is his last year. My family has different hobbies. My little brother loves biking and playing football. My mother loves to read books. My aunt loves listening to music. She loves music. I'm a student at the Schillerschool and I'm in grade 9. My Family and I live in a flat in Ettlingen. The flat has three rooms. I share my room with my little brother. We have one Balcony and we live near a footballpitch. I'm very happy about it because I love to play football. My Hobbies are playing Football and Basketball, go to the gym, an play Computergames. I can play drums and I love to read books abou fantasy and horror. My favorite books are Hunger games, Fear Street and Harry Potter. My favorite Film is Forrest Gump because its a nice film. My favorite author is Joanna K. Rowling, because she writes nice books and never gives up. She always says: poor or rich everybody has a Chance! Joanna was born in Yate. She studied French in the University of Exter. Then she worked as a Teacher in Wales. She doesn't earn much money. Then she had an idea, it was the book Harry Potter. She became famous and is one of the richest Woman worldwide. My favorite Colour is yellow because its a wonderful and luminous colour. I love listen to good music. I like listen to Justin Bieber and Selena G. If i were a millionaire, I would donate my money to poor people. I would travel to them and give them a laugt. I dont have a pet. I would like a dog but my mother says we would not care about him. My favorite food is Pizza. It just tastes good. My dream job is to be a policeman. I like jobs that are rich adventure. ( Rechtschreibung egal = aussprache + grammatik wichtig ) Danke!!

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Referat über sich auf Englisch?

Today, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Anna ..., I am 16 years old and I live in .... with my mother. I was born in Russia. When I moved to Germany with my family I was 4 year. My mother and my vather are divorced. I have an older sister, she is 23 years old. My hobbies are sleeping, cooking and meeting friends. I attend 10th grade. In August of this year i will start my training as a chemist. After my training as a chemist I would like to work one’s way up as a managar of a branch office. With 18 years I would like to make my driver's licence and move out. (ausziehen von daheim weis leider nicht wie ich das anderes formulieren kann) My wishes and plans for the future is to have two children, a cat and a wonderful husband. I would like to life in another country, learn a new language and have a good time fort the rest of my life. I hope my wishes come true.

Thank you for your attention.

Ist das so richtig? Brauch umbedingt eure Hilfe muss das bis morgen können..

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