Habe ich ein Fehler in Englisch?

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I would like to introduce a person to you. Their (Grammatik) name is Sandra J. Akins. She lives in the street in 1148 horse Street in metro polity (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.).
Their (Grammatik) nickname is Sorrells. She has (Verb) on the 24th of July, 2000 birthday (Satzstellung).
Now she is 16 years old. She has a 3-year-old brother. Their (s.o.) star sign
is a lion (Wort). She goes to 11 (Zahl) classes (Singular) in (Präposition) Frederick High School. After (---) school (Ausdruck; Komma) she goes of (Präposition) Monday till Friday to kick boxing, judo and MMA - (Satzstellung).
Before it (Ausdruck) she had made (Wort) 3 years of karate. In the (Possessivepronomen) spare time, it (Grammatik) plays
with pleasure (Ausdruck) computer games, for example, league (RS) of Legends. - (Satzstellung)

Later (Ausdruck) she would like to study with pleasure (Ausdruck) informatics or go to the police (Denglish). Their (s.o.) favorite (= AE; BE ) favourite) subjects are (---) sport (Wort) and French. Their (s.o.) (Hier fehlt ein Adjektiv) music genres are a pop,
Kpop and Jrock. Sometimes she also reads books of (Präposition) Chris Bradford. She is 153 centimetres (Hier fehlt ein Adjektiv.) and weighs 66 kilogrammes. Their (s.o.) favorite (s.o.) colour is blue. Their (s.o.) favorite (s.o.) car  (Hier fehlt was.) most hotly (Ausdruck) Peugeot Nautilus. She owns (Wort) no domestic animals (Wort). However, likes dogs. (kein vollständiger Satz) Their (s.o.) favorite (s.o.) food is (---) sushi
and frame (Wort).


Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.



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I would like to introduce a person to you. Her name is Sandra J. Akins. She lives at 1148 horse Street in metro polity. Her nickname is Sorrells. The was born the 24th of July 2000. Now she is 16 years old. She has a 3 year-old brother. Her star sign is a lion. She visites the 11th grade of the Frederick High School. From Monday to Friday she does kick boxing, judo and MMA after school. Before that she had done karate for 3 years. In the spare time, she plays computer games with pleasure , for example, League of Legends. In the future she would like to study with pleasure informatics or go to the police. Her favorite subjects are sport and french. Her favorite music genres are pop, Kpop and Jrock. Sometimes she also reads books of Chris Bradford. She is 153 centimetres tall and weighs 66 kilogrammes. Her favorite colour is blue. Her favorite car is the Peugeot Nautilus. She has no domestic animals, however, she likes dogs. Her favorite food is sushi and frame (Was ist "frame"? Bilderrahmen?"

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Kommentar von adabei
05.10.2016, 21:10

You don't "visit" a school, you attend a school.

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Ich werde alles Falsches dick verbessern.

I would like to introduce you to someone. Her name is Sandra J. Akins. She lives in 1148 horse Street in metro polity. Her nickname is Sorrells. She has birthday on the 24th of July 2000. Now she is 16 years old. She has a 3 year-old brother. Her star sign is leo. She goes to 11th class in Frederick High School. After the school she goes from Monday till Friday to kick boxing, judo and MMA. Before that she has made 3 years of karate. In her spare time, she plays with Computer games joyfully, for example league of Legends. Later she would really like to study informatics or go to the police. Her favorite subjects are sport and French. Her favorite music genres are a pop, Kpop and Jrock. Sometimes she also reads books by  Chris Bradford. She is 153 centimetres tall and weighs 66 kilos. Her favorite colour is blue. Her favorite car is the Peugeot Nautilus. She owns no pets. However, likes dogs. Her favorite food is sushi and (frame?). 

Also hier ist die Verbesserung , wusste leider nicht was du mit frame meintest du kannst es mir jedoch schreiben werde es dann nach bedarf verbesser.

Ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen!

Mfg Patler 

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Kommentar von ChickPea
06.10.2016, 00:04

Ich wuerde deine Fehler ja auch gerne FETT markieren. .... Also mach ich es dann in "unfett"

I would like to introduce you to someone. Her name is Sandra J. Akins. She lives in 1148 horse Street in metro polity. Her nickname is Sorrells. She has birthday on the 24th of July 2000. Now she is 16 years old. She has a 3 year-old brother. Her star sign is leo. She goes to 11th class in Frederick High School. After the school she goes from Monday till Friday to kick boxing, judo and MMA. Before that she has made 3 years of karate. In her spare time, she plays with Computer games joyfully, for example league of Legends. Later she would really like to study informatics or go to the police. Her favorite subjects are sport and French. Her favorite music genres are a pop, Kpop and Jrock. Sometimes she also reads books by  Chris Bradford. She is 153 centimetres tall and weighs 66 kilos. Her favorite colour is blue. Her favorite car is the Peugeot Nautilus. She owns no pets. However, likes dogs. Her favorite food is sushi and (frame?). 

Alles "unfette" muss verbessert werden. 

(PS: Das war, was mir so grob aufgefallen ist)

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