geht das als reading log eintrag?
Charlie writes his first letter to an anonymous person on 25th august, 1991. The address he has from a female person. He doesn´t want that somebody is searching for him. He tells the addressee about that he changes the names of the people he is talking about. Charlie writes about the death of his best friend Michael. His friend committed suicide. Charlie is very confuses about it. Aunt Helen has been the best aunt for Charlie. She lived in the house of Charlie’s family till she died. Charlie ends the letter writing he starts high school the next day and he´s afraid of going.Charlie writes a second letter on 11th September in year 1991 about that he doesn´t like the high school. In his advanced English class is only one girl which he knows since the middle school called Susan. Charlie discuss about the changes during the years in the school of Susan. Susan was the best friend of his dead friend Michael.
Hey.Soweit ganz gut, jedoch habe ich kleine Fehler gefunden:Am Anfang nochmal die Zeit überprüfen, da schreibst Du in der Gegenwart, später wechselst Du dann in die richtige Zeit -> Vergangenheit.
- Satz: He has the address from a female person. (Grammatik)
- Satz: He doesn´t want somebody searching for him. (soei Satzbau gefällt Lehrern mehr)
- Satz: confuses -> confused (Tippfehler)
- Satz: ...writing _____ he starts... (da fehlt meiner Meinung nach etwas)
- Satz: Direkt am Anfang zwischen dem "." und "Charlie" ein Leerzeichen vergessen