Gehört hier vor but ein Komma hin?

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Da sollte ein Komma stehen, JA.

Grund: Der Teilsatz mit "but" ist ein vollständiger Hauptsatz.

KEIN Komma würde dagegen normalerweise stehen, wenn der Satz beispielsweise "You can play here but not in the streets" hieße, denn "but not in the streets" ist kein vollständiger Satz .

Allerdings muss man feststellen, das man im Am. Englisch hier durchaus ein Komma setzen könnte (Grund: Sprechpause an der Stelle).

Hallo,

vor but steht immer ein Komma, wenn es nicht mit sondern zu übersetzen ist.

AstridDerPu

Kann jemand diesen englischen Comment Korrektur lesen?

A comment on the topic “Abortion”

A contentious issue: ABORTION. Nowadays more and more women have an abortion. But whether this interference with nature really is lawfully remains doubtful and will be discussed now.

Proponents of abortion say the argument that the woman has the right to decide about her body and thus about her pregnancy or an abortion. So no one has to care about her decision. This is true, but in the womb the embryo is already a living being and therefore the embryo is an individual and has a right to life.

In addition, the argument is repeatedly mentioned that the pregnancy was unwanted, the mothers are to young or have no partner. But I think this is the worst argument at all. There are umpteen ways to prevent a pregnancy. But if you were maybe too stupid or too lazy to preventing, it is you own fault. In such cases, there are still help sites for mothers or the option to release the child for adoption.

Moreover, an abortion is murder. Abortions dine by some medications or methods like scrape or vacuum. Many people say that the embryo does not feel any pain during abortions, but this is also false. Embryos already have a heartbeat or a nervous system in the third week of pregnancy, so they can feel pain.

All in one, I believe that an abortion is not morally justifiable. Nevertheless, there should be exceptions like if the pregnancy resulted from rape or the pregnancy constitutes a danger to the woman. When you have an abortion you kill your own flesh and blood. This action can’t be reversed, and I am sure that every woman who decides to have an abortion will get mental problems. At the end, the woman has to decide with the father about an abortion, because in Germany an abortion is allowed up to the 3rd month. So I’m against a abortion – there are too many ways to get not into such a situation. If you get into such a situation, you have to cope with the consequences.

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englisch tagebucheintrag?

Dear diary, Why, why, why? How should I start? Maybe like this: Dear diary, today, it was the best day in my life by now? I’m feeling very, very, very good? Or I believe I can fly? But no. That would be a lie. A big lie. Better I can write something like that: Dear diary, I’m feeling so bad. My whole life. My whole life will never be the same again? I try to understand why it happened. Why or how did it happen that he react like that? And why do I feel like this now? Maybe I can understand it better when I write it down and think about it. Because I don’t want to be in a situation like this in the moment. Never in life! So first. Do you still know Rob? I’ve told you form this person. Last time. Only good things. But now, you can forget all these things. Or the most of them. So. We wanted to go away. Move to London. Only the two of us. We wanted to live and work there but that was before I noticed that I was pregnant. I told him that I was pregnant, of course. Directly. Although I was extremely afraid of his reaction. And I was right. He said that he wasn’t ready to be a father. Yes I know. But I wasn’t ready to become a mother, too. And I must say. Who is ready to be a mom or a dad with 23? Indeed, an abortion was no question for me! He could go to work. Get the money. Maybe we could marry soon. (At this time I was optimistic. To optimistic.) I tried to change Robs mind. Somehow. That he says yes. Of course. It’s okey. I’ll look after our baby and help you. At last Rob and me we both are guilty. But. No. Of course. He kept saying: “What about my life and my choice?” He thought, we would fight all the time. And an abortion was the best option in our situation. But finally it is my body, my life. So it’s my choice. My choice of I want an abortion or not. All in all he doesn’t came clear (er kam nicht damit klar) that I don’t want to rid of our baby. So he left me. In the 4th month. Pregnant! From that time I don’t speak to him anymore. I hate him for that that he left me alone with the baby. With OUR baby. He said now he feel really guilty about it. But. Yes of course! I only never noticed it before! He was egoistic like a selfish monster which doesn’t care about anyone other. Except him! I don’t think that he think only one time!! Only one time what I’m feeling now. And… No okey I don’t want to become absorbed in this part. So I don’t want to get money from him. He isn’t the father of my daughter. He is only the one who made me pregnant. Now I’m living with my parents. And I really don’t know what I would do without them…

richtige zeit? oder hat jemand verbesserungsvorschläge?

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Zusammenfassen eines Texts (Obama speech)?

Hallo,

Ich zitiere:

" But today, just a few years into the twenty-first century, we've already found ourselves in a different and sometimes precarious position. As revolutions in communications and technology have broken down barriers across the world, it's given more power to both our competitors and to our enemies.

No longer can we assume that a high-school education in Boston is enough to compete for a job that can easily go to the college-educated in Bangalore or in Bejing. No more can we count on employers to provide health care and pensions and job training when their bottom lines know no borders. Never again can we expect the oceans that surround America to keep us safe from attacks on our own soil.

Was adressiert Obama in diesem Abschnitt? Oder was ist sein Besorgnis?

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Summary einer Rede (Obama)?

Hallo,

Ich zitiere:

" But today, just a few years into the twenty-first century, we've already found ourselves in a different and sometimes precarious position. As revolutions in communications and technology have broken down barriers across the world, it's given more power to both our competitors and to our enemies.

No longer can we assume that a high-school education in Boston is enough to compete for a job that can easily go to the college-educated in Bangalore or in Bejing. No more can we count on employers to provide health care and pensions and job training when their bottom lines know no borders. Never again can we expect the oceans that surround America to keep us safe from attacks on our own soil.

Was adressiert Obama in diesem Abschnitt? Oder was ist sein Besorgnis?

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Bitte kann mir jemand diesen Text grammatikalisch korrigieren?

Will Freeman is 36 years old and lives alone in a flat in London. A famous Christmas Song, that Will hates, is written by his father, which makes Will so rich, so he never had to worry about money. He is single, lives alone, has no family left and does not have real friends. Besides that, Will have just short-term girlfriends, he thinks that children just make someone unhappy and have to carry responsibility, because of that he hates children. He also refuses to be a godfather of his friends' children. In his free time, he drives fast cars, watches TV, listening to music, goes out or travels to Europe, what makes him happy with that simple life without any problems. An example the relationship with Angie, a single mother, that works at the beginning well, but after time difficult, because of problems like she does not find a babysitter at a date, which makes Will want to end the relationship, but she does it, so he would not feel guilty.
Danke im Voraus

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