Es wäre super nett; wenn mir jemand den Brief korrigieren könnte. Das Problem ist, dass es schnell gehen müsste, da ich ihn heute Abend, aller spätestens morgen vor der Schule abgeben muss. Bitte helft mir! Dankeschön! P.S.: Auch wenn ich diese Frage zu spät seht, wäre eine Korrektur sehr nett. :)
Dear Host family
First of all I want to thank you for reading my letter and spending time on getting to know me better.
My name is Romy, I'm fifteen years old and I’ll become 16 on Janurary. My friends describe me as an modest, spontaneous and funny person. Laughing is one of my favorite things to do, I'm an optimistic person and I’m always making the most out of every situation. I love to learn new things and make new experience. I'm a ambitious student. My grate point average is 2,1 and my favourite subjects are PE, art, spanish and of course english.
I live together with my 56 years old mother Ilona and my 16 years old cousin Maria. My cousin moved to me and my mother two years ago when her father died. In this two years we became like sisters. I have another sister named Julia. She's 31 years old lives near us. My grandmother lives nearby too. They are the most important people in my life and we often do activities together. I'm definitely a family man and I would love to take part in your family too.
I want to go to the USA because in my opinion, it's just the most interesting and exciting country in the world. I'm very fascinated by the landscape, the cities and of course the american way of life. I would love to live in an american family (maybe in yours?), experience the everyday life of a normal american teenager, visit a high school and learn about the american culture, traditions and american feast days we don't have in germany like Thanks giving or the american Christmas Day which is a bit different to the german christmas day.
My interests are photograph, do activities with my family and friends, for example cycle, swim or go to the climbing forrest. Another of my interests is dancing. I do showdance sinse 10 years in a dance club with about 60 members. I know everyone of them such a long time and we are like a big family. As you see, I'm a pretty sporty girl. Also I volunteer in a care home once a week. I love to make people smile. After my exchange year I want to do my A-level and after that I want to study in the social sector and then I can imagine to work as a social worker or as a child care worker. I have done my three-week externship in a kindergarten and I really enjoyed it. I have a good rapport with children so it would be my pleasure to take care of my eventual host siblings off and on.
I hope that you got a good first impression of me and my life. I'm looking forward to hear from you and even more to be a part of your family.
Sincerely yours Cleo