Hey Leute, ich hab die Frage schon mal gestellt:
In 2 Wochen habe ich meine Englische Prüfung, und dazu gehört der about my self teil, ich hab gestern ein Text geschrieben und jetzt zur meiner Frage: könntet ihr bitte ein Blick Trüber zu werfen, da meine Grammatik miserabel ist, der Text findet ihr weiter unten.
Danke jetzt schonmal für eure Hilfe und Zeit :)
PS: denkt ihr das reicht für 3-4 min ?
Good morning ... My name is Rohan... and i would like to talk a little bit about my self. I was born in Hamburg on ... so I am 16 years old. I am a friendly an polite person. I went to the primary school ... and since 2010 I attent the ... I am in class 10b and my class teacher is ... and the stundents in my class are all friendly and different. My favorite subjekts are physiks, chemistry and biology. I dont like art, because it just makes me no fun. In my freetime I meet friends, do sports and watch Anime. I speak German, Hindi my mothertounge and a little bit English. My favorite movie is Shutter Island and my favorite colours are black and green.
Now I will talk about my familie and in the end about my future plans
I have two brothers one junger and one older The older brother ist 21 years old and does bis highschool graduation here in the school My junger brother is also here in the school in the 5 class, he is 11 years old. My father is 48 Years old and his profession is salespeeson and has his own asia shop My mother visit a german course and she is a realley good cook. She dont know when she was born, because she grew up in Kabul and in Kabul nobody cares of the date and she also dosent have a zertifaktion of birth. My parents an they families cames to Germany, because of the war and the Tahliban so that they cant live there.
And my future plans: I will do my highschool gradiation and if I was good enough, I will study and if it not possible to study, I will search a training course in a bank or something like that. Ortherwise i would like to travel around the world.