Eurokom - Justin Bieber, geht das so?

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Bieber, who was... Canada, is...

parents, nicht Parent's

his father, Jeremy Bieber,...

He started singing when...

... and made the second place in a local singing competition. His mother posted...

the trumpet (Singular)

Bieber is interested...

...and helped Justin get a record contract. (So wie du es schreibst, liest es sich, als hätte Usher beim Unterschreiben geholfen. Das kann Bieber aber doch sicher allein.)

.
... was in a relationship with S. G. from 2010 until 2013.

...was German [...] and emigrated to... Justin has a German surname.

Wax figures of J.B. can be seen in Madame Tussaud's wax figure cabinets in...

...best-paid public figures under 30.


So, den letzten Absatz machst du mal allein. Kleiner Tipp: Wortstellung und Kleinschreibung beachten!



Hallo,

warum sollen wir einen Text, der ganz offensichtlich zu einem großen Teil abgekupfert ist (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Justin_Bieber; http://www.justinbieberzone.com/justin-drew-bieber-biography-profiles-biodata-bio-biografia-biografia/) - und in den dann noch Fehler eingebaut wurden (z. B. im 1. Satz Ort vor Zeit) korrigieren?

Deine Lehrer / Prüfer sind nicht auf der Brennsuppn dahergeschwommen und auch im Internet unterwegs.

    Auszug aus Zentrale Maßstäbe für die Eurocom

    (kultusportal-bw.de/servlet/PB/show/1371097/eurokom2013a.pdf)

    Bei der Präsentation des Schwerpunktthemas sollen die Schülerinnen und Schüler

    zeigen, dass sie ein selbstständig vorbereitetes Thema strukturiert, verständlich und

    anschaulich darstellen und erläutern können. Das Thema wird von der
Schülerin / dem Schüler gewählt und mit der Fachlehrkraft abgestimmt. Es
soll den

    Anforderungen der Inhalte und Kompetenzen des Bildungsplans auf dem
Niveau der Klassenstufe 10 entsprechen.

    Die Präsentation erfolgt in zusammenhängender und freier Rede
(Stichworte als Gedankenstütze sind erlaubt). Im Anschluss an die
Präsentation sind kurze

    themenbezogene Rückfragen möglich.

    Bei offensichtlich auswendig gelernter Wiedergabe bzw. beim Ablesen
eines vorformulierten Textes kann die Präsentation unterbrochen werden.
Bei der

    Präsentation ist darauf zu achten, dass die verwendeten Medien
möglichst wenig Text enthalten.

AstridDerPu

Nelson Mandela Referat auf englisch

Was kann ich noch dazu schreiben und was kann ich verbessern? bitte hift mir hab morgen prüfung

Good afternoon Mrs Kimmerle and Mrs Kinzer, today im gonna tell you something about Nelson Mandela. Nelson Rolihahla Mandela was born in Mvezo in South Africa on 18 July 1918. He is one of the most greatest human rights activitis. For his decade-long fight against Apartheid, for which he was under arrest as a political prisoner for 27 years. With his staying power an fighting spirit he set of a political change in South Africa. His determination motivated the people to protest and stand up for their rights, so the opression of the black people in South Africa came to an end. From 1994 until 1999 he was the first democratically elected State President of South Africa and respected as an idol. He was also awarded the Nobel Prize for Freedom for his actions in 1993. Before his presidency, he was a prominent anti-apartheid activist who was involved in the planning of underground-armed resistance activities.As a young student,he became involved in political opposition to the white minority government, espescially in its denial of political,social and economic rights to South Africas black majority.He also study law. He joined the African National Congress (ANC) in 1942 and later its more dynamic youth league.The armed activism was, for Mandela, a last resort; before a certain point he used to be a follower of the non-violent resistance.The point when he decided that violence was neccessary in his fight against Apartheid was when unarmed Demonstrates were shot in the Sharpeville-Massacre and the ANC and other Anti-Apartheid Groups were forbidden in 1960.n 1961, Mandela became the leader of the armed wing of the ANC, the so called “Spear of the Nation”. He coordinated a sabotage campaign against military and government targets, and made plans for a possible guerrilla war if sabotage failed to end apartheid. Nelson wedded three times. From the first two marriages he has got six childiren. He divorced from his first wife at 1957 from his second wife at 1996. On his 80 Birthday he married the widow Graca Machel, who was once married with Samora Machel the former president of Mozambique and supporter of ANC. He lost two sons. The first one died because of a car accident and the second one had got Aids.

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Charakterisierung Englisch Just Along for a Ride Fehle?!

Wäre lieb, wenn jmnd. drüberschauen könnte und evtl. Fehler findet, Verbesserungsvorschläge...

The story “Just Along for the Ride” by Dennis Kurumada in 1972 is about young boys who dirve in a car and try to flatten a kid. This plan gets out of control and doesn’t turn out well. The main character of the story ”Just Along for a Ride” is a male student, about 16 years old. The protagonist uses everyday language (l.15) He describes himself being “pretty dull” (l.3), because he drives around with his friend who just got his license. In fact he is “cold, damp and bored” (l. 5) what the narrator also tells us directly (the main character is also the narrator. That implies that they aren’t very creative, otherwise he wouldn’t be bored. As the other boys want to flatten a kid he doesn’t agree. On the one hand he has feelings of guilty, he’s a thoughtful person. On the other hand he is scared, which means that he is a careful person and thinks about the consequences. Because of this characteristic he is gibed by his friends. They think that he is a killjoy and not humorous. For example: “You worry too much. Whenever we wanna have some fun, you always chicken out.” (l.15). He isn’t very assertive or strong-minded in the beginning. His friends retune him and oppress him. For instance: “We drive up slow, then swing open the door real fast, and knock the guy on his can,” says Phil (l.10). The protagonist is against it. “You guys are nuts,” he says and “What if they call the cops?” (l.15) Although they still do it. Or in line 34 he wants the driver to stop the car but the driver convinces him that it is necessary to drive on. In the end he feels guilty even if it hasn’t been his idea and he tried to stop the others. That’s why he is really responsible-minded but he also doesn’t want his friends to get in trouble, he’s kind of loyal. He shows his feelings what makes him sensible (l.30). Finally he gets strong-minded and assertive. At night his friends visit him and propose him to forget about the crime. He gets mad and visits the victim, what nobody expects. All in all I think the protagonist is a adorable person. I can identify with the character because it’s realistic how he reacts. Besides I liked it a lot that he did not do what his friends want him to do. He goes his own was and that’s brave. In opposite to the protagonist there’s Phil also a co-driver. He is male, a student and about 16 years old. The first time he says something he cuts off the protagonist (l.8). That’s impolite and not respectful. On top of that he is vicious, careless and sneaky because he has the idea “to drive up to somebody….some kid….and flatten him.”(l.8) He is language is colloquial, e. g. “We wanna have some fun…“ (l.16) and firstly he doesn’t speak fluently (l.8) It seems that he tries to be funny and cool, so the others respect him. In conclusion I think Phil isn’t very authentic and very likeable. I have the impression that he is a daredevil and a false friend.

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My best frienddd

Habe bald Englisch Schularbeit und wollte fragen ob sich jemand meinen Text auf grammatikalische oder sprachliche Fehler ansehen könnte.

My best friend is Charlie. Charlie is 16 years old and lives in Wieselburg. I know him since my childhood and he has been always there for me. In the following text I want to describe his appearance and his qualities, which make him to the person he is.

Charlie is 1,8m high and is looking really sporty because he likes a lot of sports, which help him to hold his body in a good and healthy condition. He has brown, short hair and most of the time he is smiling because he is simply a happy person.

One of his starches is his generosity. He loves it to help other people if they are not understanding something at school or have any other problems. Moreover, he is a funny person and has always a good entertaining joke in stock. Although Charlie is such a funny person, he is also able to handle with responsibility. This feature makes him a good student. Last year he even has only ones in his school certificate.

Most of the time, if he does not have to do anything for school, he is playing outside with friends or helping in the household, which is not seen often seen nowadays. His greatest hobby is soccer. Charlie is spending nearly a hour per day on playing soccer because he wants to be a well-known football player if he is older. Not everyone can deserves his money by soccer because you have to be really good at playing football. I think his abition and enthusiasm will make him a good soccer player and that he has a real chance to become a famous football player.

All in all Charlie is a really funny and reliable person and I can be happy to have such a good friend like him.

Danke im Voraus:)

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Was könnte ich bei dieser Charakterisierung verbessern?

The short story "The Big Race" by Toby Sweet is about a swimmer who feels pity for his opponent and lets him win. This characterization is about the narrator of the story. This boy is a fast swimmer and has to swim two lengths backstroke at Chester-le-Street, on that day. One of his opponents is Gordon Hayes. Before the race, the narrator notices Gordon talking with his father. He is very sceptical and feels that something wrong is going on. Out of curiosity he asks Gordon what the matter is. He gets the answer that Gordon's father will hit his son, if he doesn't win the race. After that, while he is warming up and planning his strategy, the narrator always has to think about that. He is worried and can't concentrate. During the race the boy decides to let Gordon win, because he wants to protect him from his father and feels sorry about that. His behavior is very generous, because he doesn't think about himself in this situation. Probably the shoutig of Mr. Hayes motivates him to do that. Also Gordon has been only a half of a body behind him. Maybe the narrator has thought that Gordon can manage it. At first the boy regrets that he only has come in second. He has doubts about his decision. Maybe the second place isn't enough for him. But he isn't the typical natural winner, because he doesn't have a problem to lose under the existing conditions. He is pleased to see that Gordons father is smiling and knows it has been worth it. He is sure that his decision is right!

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Englisch Text verbessern! Bitte! :(

Kann bitte jemand mal meinen text anschauen ich geh in die 5 Klasse und bin eine völlige Niete un Englisch

The economy in the 80s in England is very chipped. In the streets of north England you see many strikes. Many mines workers are striking because mines should be closed. One of these protestants is Jackie, a father of two boys, Tony and Billy Elliot. He had lost his wife and now he is living with his children and their grandmother in a small flat, because the family doesn’t have much money. The father is a very strict and hard man and he want that his 11 years old son, Billy, be hard to, so he send him to boxing lessons. But Billy doesn’t like the unnecessary violent, he is much more interested in that what is happening in the other side of the gymnastic hall. There Mrs. Wilkinson, a slightly unment women, she is teaching some girls ballet. Finally Billy dares to exchange his box gloves for ballet shoes. Every day he goes to the ballet class without telling his father. One day his father sees that his son is dancing ballet instead of boxing. Jackie forbids his son to dance this unmanly ballet but Billy and his dedicated dance teacher Mrs. Wilkinson decide to continue the training secretly. The major goal of both is a dance audition at the Royal Ballet School in London. When his father caught Billy again when he was dancing, he was sure that Billy has Talent. Jackie becomes a blackleg to save money for his son. Finally Jackie comes with Billy to the dance audition in the Ballet school. Billy gets a letter from the Ballet School, he is taken. At the same moment the strike is broken. A few years later, Jackie and Tony Elliot go to London to see Billy dancing his first stage appearance in "Schwanensee".

und gibs ein Programm oder eine Seite die texte verbessert?

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