Es wäre lieb, wenn sich jemand meinen Text anschauen würde (Englisch )

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Auf die Schnelle:

We started (Ich würde began vorziehen.) todays lesson with (Name), who kept (Zeit) the minutes the lesson before. She talked about the Leaflet of the british army.

Immediately afterwards (Name) informed us about the news in / from the USA. She focused on one of the biggest and worst california wildfires this year, which has bruned down into (---) Yosemite National Park. there is only a spark needed to start a big fire.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

There are a lot of old sequoias, which are considered to be a symbol for the national park - A lot of them burned (= AE, BE = burnt) down.

About 2.800 (Komma statt Punkt) firefighters struggled to contain the wildfire.

finish up she took a look at the Hetch Hetchy reservoir that provides San Francisco with drinking water. She mentioned that it would be a problem kein Komma if ash would fall into this reservoir.

After her presentation Komma she got her feedback.

Than we've got the information that our english course will move (Zeit, Wort) between language and content (Sinn?). (---) next lesson we will focus on the language part.

At the end of the lesson Komma we played an interview game. Therfore we had a worksheet with twenty different questions. Each person had a partner who had to answer the questions. The intention of this game is to speak a lot. You have the opportunity to discuss something (Stil), to swap ideas or to explain something (Wiederholung; Stil) to your classmate.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Theluckyone12 29.08.2013, 22:01

Hat mir sehr geholfen, vielen lieben Dank. Finde es total lieb, dass du dir die Mühe gemacht hast :)

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