Es wäre lieb, wenn sich jemand meinen Text anschauen würde ( Stundenprotokoll Englisch )
Es handelt sich um ein Stundenprotokoll. Es wäre lieb wenn ihn jemand lesen und gegebenenfalls korrigieren würde :)
We started todays lesson with (Name), who kept the minutes the lesson before. She talked about the Leaflet of the british army.
Immediately afterwards (Name) informed us about the news in the USA. She focused on one of the biggest and worst california wildfires this year, which has bruned down into the Yosemite National Park. there is only a spark needed to start a big fire.
There are a lot of old sequoias, which are considered to be a symbol for the national park - A lot of them burned down.
About 2.800 firefighters struggled to contain the wildfire.
finish up she took a look at the Hetch Hetchy reservoir that provides San Francisco with drinking water. She mentioned that it would be a problem, if ash would fall into this reservoir.
After her presentation she got her feedback.
Than we've got the information that our english course will move between language and content. The next lesson we will focus on the language part.
At the end of the lesson we played an interview game. Therfore we had a worksheet with twenty different questions. Each person had a partner who had to answer the questions. The intention of this game is to speak a lot. You have the opportunity to discuss something, to swap ideas or to explain something to your classmate.
Liebe Grüße :)
About 2.800 firefighters struggled to get the wildfire under control
Das wäre das einzige was ich verbessern würde
Vielen lieben Dank, du hast recht :) Das hört sich besser an :)