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You will cycle in a group of about ten to fifteen persons guided by experienced city guides. They will show you famous sights and interesting spots in the city. Also, they will tell you about the history of the city and a lot of other information. They tour will go through the downtown and other city parts as well. It is 12 kilometers long and will take about 120 minutes. You can join the tour any day from March to September at 10 am or 2 pm. The meeting place is in front of the "Liebfrauenkirche" or inside the information center if the weather is bad. The price for the tour is 29€ - bicycle rent included.

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Kommentar von fallx1514
13.05.2016, 15:51

Ouh, da hatte ich ja viel falsch ^^ Vielen Dank !:)

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Kommentar von TomahawkDonVito
13.05.2016, 15:52

Price "for" the tour? Wohl eher nicht...^^

"They tour" -> their

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Liebe fallx1514,
ich hab all deine Fehler verbessert und den Text einmischen geändert:

It’s a group of 10 to 15 persons who are guided by experienced city guides. The guides will show you attractions and sights of the city. They will also tell you something about the history of the city and give you information about it. The guide goes through the downtown and other city parts and only needs two hours for 12 km. It’s from march to september at 10:00 a.m. or 14:00 pm. The meeting point is in front of the "Liebfrauenkirche" downtown (If the weather is bad, it’s inside the Information centre) It costs 29€ per person inclusive a bike.

Ich hoffe, ich konnte dir helfen !
LG Firstboss 

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Kommentar von Firstboss
13.05.2016, 15:54

ich hoffe du zeichnest mich als beste Antwort aus :)

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Kommentar von fallx1514
13.05.2016, 15:55

Auch dir ein herzlichen dank ! :)

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Liebe fallx1514,ich hab all deine Fehler verbessert und den Text einmischen geändert: It’s a group of 10 to 15 persons who are guided by experienced city guides. The guides will show you attractions and sights of the city. They will also tell you something about the history of the city and give you information about it. The guide goes through the downtown and other city parts and only needs two hours for 12 km. It’s from march to september at 10:00 a.m. or 14:00 pm. The meeting point is in front of the "Liebfrauenkirche" downtown (If the weather is bad, it’s inside the Information centre) It costs 29€ per person inclusive a bike.Ich hoffe, ich konnte dir helfen !LG Firstboss

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