Englischen Text korrigieren, kann mir jemand helfen?

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Customers of the Salon Tang Tang want to be seen as people who differentiate from the average population. The first picture should illustrate this. The person in this picture take away her mask and shows her face, what distinguish her uniqueness. The second picture express the term “open-minded”. The customers want to be perceived as they are open to new things and other cultures. An other aspect is (kein Komma) that they feel not just open-minded but as well very modern. They want to be viewed as progressive persons like the woman in the third picture. The last image shows a very expensive caviar. This express that the customers want to be seen as someone who can afford high quality and upscale food.

Customers of the salon Tang Tang are people who are looking for something unusual. They are searching for a little adventure and a break in the everyday life. The first two pictures represent this feeling. A person who watch wistfully a plain and wish to see an other culture or discover a new place (kein Satz). The other picture shows a man who looks exhausted and bored while he is watching the city trough the window. He want to see something different and experimented diversity. He share the same feeling like the man on the first picture. The next picture shows a woman who holds a bread in her hands and seem to realize the origin and the great significance of natural and good foodstuff. This is an aspect she has with the salons customers in common. The last picture should represent that the customers of the brand are mostly gourmets. They enjoy good food and drinks, especially Asian food.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

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Kommentar von stekum
28.08.2015, 11:01

Hätte ich diese Antwort rechtzeitig gesehen, hätte ich mir meine sparen können.

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Die Aufgabenstellung ist nicht ganz klar. Hast Du den ersten Absatz im zweiten Absatz "Verbessert", oder gab es einen deutschen Text für beide? Dann sollte der auch hier stehen.

Auf jeden Fall sind sehr viele Fehler drin.

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Kommentar von Sophiew008
28.08.2015, 09:12

Es handelt sich um ein Moodboard, es gibt 6 Kategorien, der Rest des Textes ist in meinem anderen Post da der Text zu lang war. Es werden mit jedem Absatz Bildergruppen erläutert bzw warum diese genutz wurden um ein Restaurant als Marke in den 6 Dimensionen darzustellen. Ich bin für jede Hilfe seeehr dankbar! vielen dank

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Customers of the salon Tang Tang are people who are looking for something

unusual,  for adventure and a break in their everyday life. The first two pictures

represent this feeling. A person who watches wistfully a(n) (air)plain, indicating

the wish to see people of other cultures and discover other places. The next

picture shows a man who looks exhausted and bored while he is watching the

city through the window. He wants to see something different and experience

diversity. He shares the same feeling as the man of the first picture. The next

picture shows a woman who is holding a bread in her hands and seems to

realize the origin and the great significance of natural and good foodstuff. This

is an aspect she has in common with the customers of the salon. The last

picture shall illustrate, that these are mostly gourmets. They enjoy good food

and drinks, especially Asian food.

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geh auf google übersetzer und tu das übersetzen auf deutsch. danach durchsuchst du nach fehler und wenn du einen findest, kannst du mit der maus auf den fehler gehen (NICHT anklicken) und im englischen text wird das markiert was du im deutschen mit der maus draufgegangen bist. Hier ist ein link:

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es geht wirklich!!! Der Link ist wahr!!! in wirklichkeit ein riesiger link. den link musst du markieren und kopieren!!!

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Kommentar von Flupp66
28.08.2015, 09:30

Das kann doch nicht dein Ernst sein. ^^

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