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Do young people spend to much time in sitting in front of TV or computer screens?
Some parents believe that watching television is bad for their children. So, they try to limit their children from watching TV. However, other parents think that there is nothing bad in watching TV. Personally, I think that watching TV brings children only benefits unless they spend in front of TV set less then a couple of hours every day.
First of all, television helps a child to extend his or her list of interests. Children can find out many new things and make many exiting discoveries for themselves. In addition to these practical benefits television improves children's vocabulary, their memory and gives them the opportunity to get more knowledge. I think it is very important for a child. Of cause, someone can say that there are plenty of different resources of information such as books and teachers. But, I think, in our modern world children must learn faster and use all modern technology in order to succeed.
Secondly, watching documentaries helps children to learn more about wild life, our environment and about our forest and wild animals that live there.
Scientists say that a child should not watch TV more then 40 minutes. For example, my mother always made us have a break after watching TV more then half an hour and let our eyes rest for several minutes before turning on the TV again. I think it is the best solution.
To sum up, I believe that television gives children and all people the opportunity to learn what can not be learn from books. Television and movies in particular allow people to feel the reality and see what they will most likely not be able to see in their lives. Personally, when I was a child I liked to watch documentaries about wild animals. Unfortunately, my family had only one TV, but these programs were the only ones we all wanted to watch.