Hallo alle mit einander.
Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit wo ich eine angegebene Geschichte weiterschreiben soll. Das wollte ich jetzt ein wenig üben.Könnt ihr bitte drübergucken ob ich alles beachtet habe ,also ob die Satzstellung richtig ist oder ob ich die richtige Zeit benutzt habe.
Danke im voraus.
The brown paper bag
...Soon a man came in and sat down next to the girl without saying a word.Seconds later he casually put a brown paper bag into the girl's handbag She showed no reaction, and the man left quickly.Cheryl had just started to say :''See that?He...''when the girl stood up and came over to their table, smiling sweetly at Marcel. Cherly
would never forget that smile.''Hi,my name's Doreen,''she said.''I was wondering if you could help me.'' (ab hier schreibe ich weiter)
Marcel was a bit confused.Then he said :,,yes,of course , what happened.'' My little ,black dog ran away, could you help me to find it , pleace,Doreen replied.Marcel and Cheryl went out to search Doree's dog, but at that moment Doreen started to run away . Marcel follwed her and caught her Doreen fall down and the brown paper bag, which the man , in the cafè, had put into the girls handbag , fell over her bag.Cherly took it up and looked into the paper bag. There were more than ten drogs.She phoned the police quickly and they took her to the policestation.The police said that this isn't the first time that Doreen bought illegal drogs. After all the police looked closer to Doreen's designer handbag. It was that handbag which was stolen two weeks befor. Doreen stolen a expensive handbag and bought illegal drogs. So she was arrested for one year.At the next day Cherly and Marcel brought the handbag to the shop, where it was stolen. As a thanks they got 5.000 €.
Was ist der unterschied zwischen ''said to be'' und ''supposed to be''?