Englisch Text über Frankfurt?

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Hallo,

Frankfurt is a great (= großartig; nicht groß) city in Germany. Frankfurt has ca. (RS) 700 000  inhabitans (RS; Punkt) In Frankfurt people celebrate a lot of festivals. (Ich würde die Ortsangabe ans Satzende stellen.) You can see and do lots of exciting things there (in Frankfurt oder auf den Festivals?). For example: You (RS) can visit museums and parks.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

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Kann jemand diesen Englisch Text korrigieren? :/ Rechtschreibung egal :)

I'd like to be a childcare assistant, because I love working with children. I'm a friendly and patient Person, and I like working in a team. I'm creative and I have a lots of ideas, because I think it's important to entertain the children. I understand Children and I'm a good listener and I have a nice turn of Phrase. I often do babysitting, for example I often look after my Cousins. They're four and six years old. I'm a reliable and energetic Person, and I'm funny. I'm punctual and flexible too, and that is important for the job as a childcare assistant. I would like to do this job, because it's exciting to watch somebody grow. I'd really like to do this job, because I think I would be good at it.

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Schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit.Könnte ich das hier so ungefähr in der Arbeit schreiben?:/

Hallo. Ich schreibe morgen eine Englischarbeit :unser Thema wird hauptsächlich Medien sein. Wir müssen einen Text über die pros and cons bei Medien aufschreiben. Hier habe ich mal ein Beispiel wie ich das schreiben würde .Ich bin mir aber noch nicht sicher ob das gut genug is.Könntet ihr mir helfen.Habe ich dort ein paar Fehler und wenn ja welche ?wäre echt sehr nett .Danke:)

Its a fact that we couldnt life without medias.I will Show you what are the pros and cons of certain medias are.We start with theradio.What is positive and what is negative?Negative is,you can only hear the Music or the sounds but you can not see anything .Anyway you can be passive and relaxed.At the Radio you will hear some News of the world,the weather and traffic.At the Internet everybods can upload or download Information ,Videos and Songs ,so you can be a star witch doing yourself Music.On the reality TV there are real People in real situations.It is good because you would be entertaint and you can get fame ,Money and cheap to produce as the actor.But is Reality Tv always realtity?No it is fake.Also you can watch Newchanel and choose what yiu want to watch.An finally Comes the newspaper.öIt is not always up to late and the Journalist is under pressure(daraus folgt Pfeil)they get Deadlines.Positiv is the News are interesting for the Reader.

Ich weiß ich kann nicht so gut englisch (leider)

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Brauche eure Hilfe in English, da ich einen Text über teenage millionaire geschrieben habe?

könntet ihr meinen Text kontrollieren denn ich geschrieben habe und mich versuche zu verbessern und würde mich über eure Hilfe sehr freuen und bedanke mich schon im Voraus.

Today I will speak about teenage millionaire?

Can a teenager takeover the full responsibility for the whole money? First, the money makes you addicted after a while and then you try to buy everything that you like, but this can lead to the fact that you get into debt and do not come out anymore and have bought the money for unnecessary things like drugs or things you again economical. 

Another aspect is that one has no real friends because of any money, but fake friends who stand behind the money and are not interested in you and want to profit only from you. It is nice to be rich because one can afford the things which one wanted long. A study suggests that this makes you addicted and no more can stop.

They also help friends who cannot afford things which so desire and there are not all greedy for money. I mean, of course, you can buy everything that you can buy that doesn´t make you always happy. I don't like rich kids because they are selfish. 

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Written discussion

Hallo wir haben als hausaufgabe aufbekommen eine written discussion zu schreiben. Ich hab mal eine geschrieben könntet ihr den mal durchlesen und meine fehler korrigieren oder verbesserungen vorschlagen?

Thema:Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives.More than 90% of german teenagers have a mobile phone of their own.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones?

Mobile phones have become an important part of our lives. More than 90 % of German teenagers have a mobile phone. But is a mobile phone really important? Here are advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones.

My first argument against mobile phones is that the most teenagers use a mobile phone in the lesson. They play games and send emails or short messages to someone. So they are they are distracted from the lesson and get bad marks.

The next point is, that some people can’t stop using mobile phones. They get addicted.They lose their social contacts and spend all their time on their mobile phones.A good example is my friends brother, he haven’t got social contacts he is all the time write short messages or calls to friends.

The last point is that mobile phones are unhealthy. I have heard in many television reports that mobile phones can be cause of cancer.

On the other hand there are arguments for the using of mobile phones too.

Firstly you are very flexible. You can use it everywhere at any time.For example you are waiting for the next train and you are bored, you can use your mobile phone. You can listen to music,play games or go online when you have an Internet flat. More Important is that the mobile phone is helpful in case of emergency.If something happen on the way to school or somewhere else you can call to the emergency.

The most important is that you are always be in contact with your friends and your family. So your parents mustn’t care where you are. With one call they can know it.

After looking at both sides I’m in the opinion that mobile phones are important for the most people.

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ENGLISCH TEXT SCHREIBEN ;)

Ich hab ein Problem, ich muss ein Text zum Thema work experience ( Berufserfahrungen- Praktikum) mit pro und contra argumenten schreiben. Den Anfang habe ich dank gutefrage.net bereits fehlerfrei formulieren können :) Jetzt hab ich noch einige Argumente die ich mit möglichst abwechslungsreichen Satzanfängen mit in den Text einbringen möchte :) Könnt ihr mir dabei helfen weitere Sätze zu formulieren? wäre sehr lieb, danke schonmal im Vorraus.

Textanfang: From my point of view work experience is good for life because you can get first impressions of what a job is like. In my opinion you learn something important for future. Moreover many Teenagers don't know what they want to do later and a work experience can help them.

Weitere Argumente die ich einbringen möchte: 1. a work experience is good for your letter of application, because you can say that you have done a work expression 2. learn to be independent (3. practical experience) 4. learn to work in a team

Das wäre mein schluss: My tip, first you should go to a career-advice-centre, where you can get a lot of information about different jobs. And then you should do a placement in a job you have choosen.

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