Englisch prüfung vorbereitung mündlich themen vorbereitung

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I (---) would like to introduce myself and give you some information about my Persohn

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(---) here is a brief insight into my resume. CV: Name. Address. Born in and on Nationality Marital Status Children.

Education. Elementary school red stone ???. 4 years enrolled from 97 normal ??? From 2001 Komma

School Real ??? then nothing (nichts?) then, profession (Beruf?), professional school ???

PC knowledge, and metal (Metall?), which are also strengthen my.

Hobbies motorcycling and fishing.

Hier fehlt etwas To my family. I have 2 sisters, but have been living my childhood with my father.

Have no contact with my mother. gewurden'm big on the country.

Interested in training me zerspannungsmechaniker.

I signed a contract (Was für ein Vertrag?), but the real need for that school graduation???. I'm going there to prezisionsabeit cnc machines perform

in the form of Cutting Surface metals, eg

waves (???) or components manufacture for engines. (Satzstellung)

in my free time Komma I like to ride hier fehlt ein Possessivpronomen motorcycle, but hier fehlt ein Personalpronomen also like angel ???,

often times few hours or 1 night at the Saale.

but I prefer to go 2-3 days off to a lake (Satzstellung)

mostly in mmer there and angel on large carp (Satzstellung)

**one of them is fun ???***

in the tent was calm

and wait (Zeit) for the fish withdraws its???.

the drill then it is the best???.

the drill is to land the fish gently.???

The lovely??? consists of catching the biggest fish, it has long been a widespread form of sport.

Unfortunately, the catch and put back in Germany is prohibited

Catsch called to release.???

However, make 80% of the angler and is also to be sometime legalized in Germany

which is simply the hintergurnd the big fish are the best ablaicher and sonso are not recyclable. ???

who wants to eat something? The hobby is very expensive, my equipment for that alone took me until now scarce??? 8000 euros.

heimats my place is a village near shaven.

I like the always calm there

and the many space

through the large land around the house

one living in an apartment or in the city I could imagine at all.???

I'm also thrilled hier fehlt eine Präposition technology Komma but not too much.

I'm not like other pc or mobile phone crazy (Satzstellung).

I'd rather have as one of the newest tvs and a playtationen it ???. the graphics while playing is just great. However, I find it hard to time??? because of my family time.

that was it

thank you (---)

OMG - so viele Fehler.

Das Fettgedruckte - also so ziemlich alles - ist falsch, muss korrigiert und neu formuliert werden.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.


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