englisch presentation: job while going to school
hallo ich muss eine presentation in englisch halten über das thema : job while going to school und dafür musste ich pro und contra argumente finden ich wollte nun euch darum bitten dass mir jemand mein text durchlest und eventuel noch was ergäntzt wenn was falsch ist oder wenn ihnen noch was besseres oder weiteres einfällt BITTEEE ES IST SEHRR WICHTIHHHHgg
job while school today i will present you the positiv and negativ points of jobs while school. Now i will beginn with the positiv sight. A job is often a very good thing for teenagers. On the one hand they sniff in the professional world and get information about the work life for example how hard it is to work and the bodily effort. On the other hand they become more independent and learn more to controle their own life for example they learn to go with the money so they buy just things what they realy need and learn how hard it is earn it. The next positiv point is, that the teens have more pocketmoney for hisselfes so they can achieve their own wish and they arent contolled by the parents. On the one hand you can also save money foe example for your futur or foe a driver's licence. But a job also has negativ sights. By a job, you will be have less free time than before. Therefore, it can happen that you disregard your school your friends and other activitys. On the one hand you are bodily stressed cause the hard work that is the fact, that you are still tired in school because you need more sleep.
FAZIT: A job is good so long as it not disregarde school.
von der grammatik her habe ich keine ahnung aber vom inhalt ist es perfekt :)
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Today, I will present you the positive and negative aspects of having a job while going to school. I will begin with the positive things: A job often is a very good thing for teenagers. They take a whiff of the professional world and get information about working life, for example how hard it is to work and the (required) physical effort. Furthermore the become more independent and they learn to control their lives more, they learn for example to be good with money so that they only buy things they really need and they learn how hard-earned money is. Another positive aspect is that the teenagers have more pocket money for themselves, so they can fulfill their own wishes and they aren’t controlled by their parents. You can also save money, for example for your future or for a driver’s license. But a job also has negative aspects. With a job you have less free time. Therefore it can happen that you’re negligent of school, your friends and other activities. Furthermore you are physically stressed due to the hard work so that you are tired in school because you need more sleep. BOTTOM LINE: A job is good as long as it doesn’t affect school.
Und es scheint mir, du weißt nicht wirklich, was "on the one hand" und "on the other hand" heißt, oder? "on the one hand" = einerseits; "on the other hand" = andererseits
Inhaltlich ist der Text gut, sprachlich noch nicht so, aber ich denke mal, du hast auch noch nicht so lange Englisch, oder?