Englisch Präsentation Text ist er richtig?
Hallo kann den Text jemand kontrollieren und wenn es Fehler gibt mir diese schreiben? The Labrador
The labrador is the most famous dog of the world. His full name is „Labrador Retriever“. The roots of the Labrador isn´t europe, it is the canadian east coast. more specifically of the same name is the Labrador island. The labrador is coming from canadia and he has the same roots as the breed Neufundländer. The story begins at the end of the 20. century. At the first time everybody use the labrador for the the hunt from wild animals. Later the royals come to the breed became attentive. The royals use the Labrador for the fetch and so came the Labrador to europe. The word fetch means in german -apportieren-. Today everybody use the labdrador for a family dog. But now is coming the question, why you doesn´t take the labrador for the fatch? This question is very easy to answer! The labrador is the nicely to person of the world. He has many patience with kids and people they have the first dog. Positive characteristics of the labrador are the big patience, the obedience and the alertness. When the labrador tagged his area, he would not accept if a foreign person penetrates. that´s why is the labrador so affable with his family and he want all do for his family. Furthermore the labdrador has good character taits and he also has a very good body. His head and his teeth are very strongly. Next the labrador has a very waterproof fur, because the underfur is much thick. The switch is at the beginn very thick and to the end more and more smaller. Colloquial the switch name is rescue applications in german -Otterschwanz-. In the hind legs they are very stong muscles. Through the switch is so waterproof the water rescue take very often the labrador for rescue applications, because one of the hobbies from the labrador is swimming. Now i come to the important points when you buy a good labrador retriever. The first important thing is, you must find a good breeder that means, the breeder is registred in the LCD (Official Labrador Club). Next the breeder has a hygienic home for the labrador puppies. The labrador puppies have a family tree and breeder papers. Now it go´s on with the parent animals. The female dogs need a high from 55cm and the male needs a high from 66cm. At last the parent animals have a good look and a beautiful impression. Next i come to my own oppinion about the Labrador. I think it is a very beautiful breed but this breed need a good breeder and a good familytree. You can do everything with this dog. For example with your dog you can go to a club and train with your dog.
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The labrador is the most famous (Wort) dog of (Präposition) the world. His (Pronomen) full name is „Labrador Retriever“. The roots of the Labrador isn´t (Subjekt-Verb-Bezug) europe (RS), it is the canadian (RS) east coast. more (RS) specifically of the same name is the Labrador island (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.). The labrador is coming (Zeit) from canadia (RS) and he (Pronomen) has the same roots as
the breed Neufundländer (Word Order) . The story (Wort) begins at the end of the 20. (= deutsch) century. At the first time (Wendung) everybody use (Präposition) the labrador for the (---) hunt from (Präposition) wild animals (Wendung) . Later the royals come (Zeit) to the breed became attentive (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.).
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