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Hello, my name is...Thank you for coming.
Today I would like to talk about my work experience at a vet in 2016.
The firm's name is (Beispiel: "Local Vet" in 34a Abraham Street).
4 people are working there. 2 Vets and 2 assistants. But only one vet per day. Most of the time the patients are dogs with small injuries.
My personal working times were from 9am to 12am and from 4pm to 7pm.
My tasks were to clean the examination table and to feed the dogs during vaccinations. I was also allowed to be a witness of an operation and I learned that this job is definitely not easy because you see a lot of things that are hard to watch, like intestines. Now I know much about what a vet's tasks are and how big their knowledge is because they have to be able to recall which dog needs which kind of treatment. And even though my working time was limited to 8 hours, sometimes I had to work overtime. Nevertheless, this working experience has helped me a lot with the decision for my future job because even if it's hard sometimes every day a new, exciting challenge is awaiting and it never gets boring.
Thank you for listening.
:)

Kommentar von L13456
14.02.2016, 11:20

Gibt es auch noch eine andere Einleitung? Wir sollen uns so vorstellen und dann sagen das wir es gut finden das alle da sind und so was halt 

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Kommentar von BrutalAberWahr
14.02.2016, 13:58

Ein Beispiel wäre: Hello everybody, thank you for coming. My name is... and today I would like to talk about my work experience(s) at the (local) vet .

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Kommentar von BrutalAberWahr
14.02.2016, 14:00

Das ist genau wonach du gefragt hast. Vorstellen und sich beim Publikum bedanken.

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Hello,

my (RS) name is .... Thank you for coming. Today I'd like to talk about my work experience in....2016 by (Präposition) a vet (Ort vor Zeit) .

The firm name (Grammatik) is..... The adress (RS) ... hat da jemand einen geeigneten Satz?

There work 4 people (Komma) 2 vets and 2 assistant (Grammatik; Komma) but there work (Grammatik) only 1 vet per day (Satzstellung) . There are coming (Zeit) many animals and the most time (Ausdruck) there are dogs.
The firm helps the animals by (Präposition) small injuries.

Dann brauche ich eine
Überleitung zu meinen Arbeitszeiten from 9to 12 and from 16 to 19 .

(---) I have (Zeit) to clean the table and (---) give the dogs food während der
Impfung.

Also (kein Satzanfang) I had to watch by (Präposition) an operation and so I have experienced (Zeit) that this job is not easy because you see a lot of disgusting things. I had learnt (Zeit) much about the vet (Formulierung; Komma) e.g. what for (Denglish) tasks they had (Zeit) to do and which vaccinations are necessary etc.

Obwohl ich nur 8 Stunden arbeiten
durfte musste ich manchmal länger arbeiten.

My work experience has helped me a lot for future my job because I find this job very
exciting and you get every day new challenges so (Word Order) it never becomes (Wort) boring.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

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