Hi, ich habe bald eine münd. Prüfung im Fach Englisch vor mir und brauche eure hilfe.Könnte jmd das bitte grammatikalisch korrigieren?Verbesserungs vorschläge sind erwünscht.:D About me
Hello my name is xxx and I want to tell you something about me. I'm 14 years old. I was born on xx August xxxx I can speak German, English,Turkish . I live with my parents since xxx in xxx,Germany.Before we came to xxx we lived in xxx. I'm a student at a xxx grade class at the xxx My hobbies are playing guitar and drawing.But I think I like drawing more than playing guitar.I draw since I was 11. And I think that I can draw well. One of my artwork,which I made in the art lesson in the school ,was choosen to “Arbeit des Monats” .I was and I am very proud.Since I was four I want to became a lawyer and after school I want to study law I think I want to study in Cologne because I search in the internet :,,Jura uni ranking” and Cologne is on third place.The reason why I want to became a lawyer is,because I want defense innocent people.I know that I need a hard qualification ,and I must learn very much for the qualification and the study is seven years long but if I am able to do this job very good I earn much money.Everybody says that the money is not important.The most important thing ist that you have fun but I don
t think so.I love drawing but I dont want to became an artist because when youre not famous you can do nothing with your life.I think everybody want to became an actor but it is very risky because when you not famous enough you can´t do nothing with your life.I think everybody must be realistic.And that’s an another point why I want to became a lawyer.And I am very ambitious,so if I want to became a lawyer, I will learn very hard for it.I prepare my future carrier already.I am in the “Rechtskunde AG”.Every Thursday a judge from (Stadt) come to the school and teach us about the rights or another things.When we finish it we became a certificate.I think its good when I apply for a job I can show it ,too.Also I will do my work placement at a law office.