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Tom Grooney was born on 3. (= deutsch) February (Komma) 1977. He was
the third children (Grammatik) as (Wort) he was born. Tom has two (---) sisters. Toms (Grammatik) childhood was great (kein Komma) because he lived with his grandparents in (Präposition) a lake in Ireland. Tom was very good at school, he studied socioogy (RS) and history at the university in Belfast (Ausdruck). He met a beatiful (RS) girl and her name was Deirdre, she was a student too. Tom fall (Zeit) in love with Deirdre and they got married. They bought a small house in the country and had two children. The first baby was a boy and they decided his name to Tim
(Grammatik)

(neuer Satz)
He was born in 2002. The second baby was a girl (Punkt) Tom and Deirdre decided  her name for (Ausdruck) Liz (neuer Satz) she was born in 2004. Deirdre got her own job as a sociology teacher and Tom to be (Grammatik) a historian. Tom worked at home to care abouut (RS; Präposition) the children. It was
(Ausdruck)
a happy family. Tom and Deirdre had a surprise (Ausdruck), they are getting (Zeit; Wort) an another baby. The baby was a girl too, they gave her the name Pauline (neuer Satz) she was born in 2012. Deirdre had (---) mother’s leave and cared about (Präposition) Pauline (neuer Satz) in the meantime worked Tom at (---) university.


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