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Since the temperatures are back in game, I put on my new bomber jacket from Asos. I have nothing green in the closet, because green is not my
color, but the dark green jacket just looks so good. However, the jacket
fits only with black pants - as the one from Zalando- and black boots,
because too much variety of colors in an outfit does not look good.

oder so ...

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Habe mal den Text von Smexah genomen und noch ein wenig verbessert, obwohl der erste Satz auch im deutschen seltsam klingt..:

Since the temperatures are back in game, I put on my new bomber jacket from Asos. I don't have any green things in my closet, because green is not my 
color, but the dark green of the jacket just looks really nice. However, the jacket only suits to black pants - as the one from Zalando- and black boots, 
because too much variety of colors in an outfit does not look nice.

Ist keine Falls perfekt, aber schonmal besser.

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