Englisch Essay Globilization
Ich habe ein Essay über Globilization verfasst und würde gerne wissen ob das ganze von der Grammatik passt.
Globalization – The world is growing closer
“Before you’ve finished breakfast this morning, you’ll have relied on half the world.”
With reference to the quotation of Martin Luther King I like to write an essay about globalization. King wanted to say, that we are dependent to people who make our clothes or cater for our coffee as example. We have to rely of people from all over the world to start the daily routine. This can be summarized as globalization. However is it boon or bane to be concerned to international trade?
Globalization causes a big variety of products on which consumers can choose. So Germans can buy cars from France, Italy or other countries and vice versa. Through the exchange of technology and science, for example studies in a foreign country, we have the possibility to develop communication technology faster. That effects in getting information and news easier and faster. Another progress of globalization is growing infrastructure, which make it possible to travel the world and to trade import and export goods. The growth of trade and economic results in low-cost products and furthermore cheap goods.
On the contrary firms go to abroad to produce cheaper. Huge companies don’t fabricate their goods in hole at the home country. They shift some production stages in low-cost regions. In fact of the global competition might have a negative effect on the economy of the home country, because the outsourcing directs to fewer jobs and low-paid jobs. Through the growing infrastructure not only traveling and trading increase, also the environmental pollution and global warming increase, too. The most of low-cost country have bad working conditions, child labor and a worst health care. Not alone low-cost regions suffer under these conditions, the rich or richer one, too. Often the people worry about the quality of imported products, e.g. food. And last but not least, the waste of food and other natural resources like oil, water and so on.
To sum up, globalization has good and bad consequences. Globalization is a long and slow progress which has the opportunity to guide the world in a brilliant and shining future or destroy the world and the humans. We all care responsibility which way our world and therefore the globalization of the world takes. If everyone acts cautiously with its environment and respects the work of its fellow human beings we have not to be afraid about globalization and the future of the world.
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