Englisch Aufsatz und Verbesserung
Hallo Leute. Wir sollen in englisch einen Brief/Mail an meine Freundin schreiben. Naja. Könntet ihr mir vielleicht sagen was ich besser machen könnte? Schonmal danke: Dear Kathrin! I must tell you from something really awful that has happened to me last saturday! I was at a party at a friend's house. While I was dancing, I suddenly saw this fantastic lad that I've fancied for absolutely ages! I was wearing this fab New jeans and a really cool Top, and my confidence was pretty High, so I decided to go up to him to introduce me. When I was just a few feet away from him, I slipped and fell. The next moment I was laying on the floor in front of him. When i was looking up, he and his mates were all laughing at me. It was terrible I can say you, I've never felt so embarassed in my life.
I must tell you about ( nicht from ) something really awful [...] I was wearing these fab new jeans I'd bought and a really cool top ( nomen immer klein ) and I was really / pretty ( also such dir halt ein adjektiv aus :) ) confident so I decided to go up to him and introduce myself. [...] The next moment I was lying ( kein a ) on the floor [..] When I looked up, he and all of his mates were laughing at me. I tell you - it was terrible, I've never felt so embarassed in my life. Jetzt stimmts; also so würd ich's schreiben und ich bin Engländerin ... :)