Charakterisierung Englisch Just Along for a Ride Fehler?!

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Another important character is the driver of the car. His name is Dick, he is male, a student and about 16 years old. He just got his driver's license (= AE; driving licence = BE). (l.6). Either (Stellung) he is ruthless, mean and cruel or he doesen’t want to appear to be cowardly / a coward or lose his coolness. But maybe he isn’t very clever or anticipatory (Wort) and that’s the reason why he wants to flatten somebody. After the accident he shows his feelings. “Tears were blobbing in his eyes (l. 34), so perhaps he isn’t as callous as it appeared to be in the beginning. But this thought vanishes quickly. Probably (Stellung) he isn’t crying because he injured (Zeit) somebody, he’s crying because he is frightened about (Präposition) himself. He’s an egoist and non-considerate, he even doesn’t help the victim. In fact, Dick is a hit-and-run driver (l .35),who is frightened to get (Präposition; Gerund)

nailed (Stil) for man-slaughter and he doesn’t stand behind the thinks (Wort) --- he does.

He is assertive, so they do what he wants to do, for example, they don’t stop to help Ken Benjamin (l.35). - Was soll das heißen? Wer ist they?

In the end, he has the brass (Stil) / audacity to go to the protagonist and to propose / suggest that they forget everything because “No one knows”.

Even in the end, he has not got any / does not have any feelings of guilt

and is not wise (Rechtschreibung, keine Kurzformen, Wort).

To sum up, I can say kein Komma that Dick isn’t a sympathic = verständnisvoll; sympathisch = likeable person. He has not got any / does not have any feelings of guilt or feels sorry. He just thinks about (Präposition) himself. But someday truth will come out.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B.,

für die Grammatik und

  • In der Schriftsprache sollten keine Kurzformen (doesn't usw.) verwendet werden.
  • nail, have the brass - Sprachniveau, kein Standard-Englisch

Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

:-) AstridDerPu

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Kommentar von dickbig
27.08.2012, 21:04

Danke! Ich kann mich nur wiederholen, eine weitere richtig gute Antwort mit der man wirklich etwas anfangen kann!;)


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