Kann mir bitte jemand seine Meinung über meinen Report geben und ihn eventuell verbessern?
Guten Abend alle User , ich lerne grad für eine Englisch Schularbeit , bei der wir einen Report schreiben müssen.Ich habe einen geschrieben und würde gerne wissen was andere Menschen über meinen Report halten und ihn auch verbessern falls nötig.
Würde mir sehr weiter helfen und ich würde sehr glücklich werden :P
So hier mein Report:
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Introduction As requested , I have done some research into sights in London.There are many of them but the three most popular are the London Eye , the Shakespeare Globe Theatre and the Tate Modern.
London Eye The London Eye is a huge wheel which spinns the whol day.The capsuls where you stay in are enormous and offers many space for visitors.When you hit the highest point of the Wheel you will have a wonderful view over the city.It is not difficult to find the location of it .It is across the House of Parlament.
Shakespeare Globe Theatre
This is not the orginal one from 1599 it is a copy.If you want to go in you have to buy a ticket in the museum which is next to the globe.Inside the museum you see for example clothes from Shakepaer´s time or many other things which are interesting.The negative point of it is that you can not go alone into the Globe you have to be with a guide the whole time because sometimes there is a rehearsal in the Globe.
The Tate Modern was a factory in the past but the english people converted it into a museum of modern art.It is very big and inside there are shops wehere you can buy souvenirs .Sometimes there are interesting ostenations which shows modern and classic art.
In conclusion , it is cleart that all of them are interesting and exciting but not everyone likes the same things and have the same interests so it depends on you which sight you would like to visit.
Danke an alle die mir helfen :D
Lg Dino :D