Brief an die Gastfamilie (Auslandsjahr)?
ich werde nächstes Jahr für 5 Monate in Kanada sein.Ich muss jetzt den Brief für die Gastfamilie schreiben und ich bin mir so unsicher ob der gut ist.( speziell der letzte Teil). Könntet ihr euch ihn vielleicht mal durchlesen.... Danke im voraus
my name is … and i was born on 4th April 2004 in Berlin. I live together with my mum … and my dog Sally. I don’t have any brothers or sisters. We live in an house in … . …. is a town near Cologne. It has about 300.000 inhabitants. I go to the ninth grade of ……..
My favorite subjects are PE , maths and chemistry.I think our school system is quiet different from yours and I’m very curious to see how yours function. While i go to the High School I hope that I can choose some interesting subjects like photography or Theatre because here in Germany we do not have subjects like these. In my free time I like to meet my friends. We go shopping, go to the cinema. Sometimes we also do sleepovers or we bake together.
I play volleyball for 6 years and I really love it. But I’d really like to try out new stuff.
My family is a very important part of my life and I can do a lot of great things with them like going swimming or sometimes just talking. I’ve always loved traveling a lot and my mum and I have been to some countries but Canada especially Ontario always fascinated me. In my exchange year I would like to learn something about the culture and I hope I will (lifelong) friends. 1.But of course I also want to speak English very well 2.My aim is to speak English very well. I chose the Ontario School District because of the high academic level. The nature and the city also impresses me.
I really hope that I will be able to become a part of your family. I cant wait to meet you.
... school system is quite - nicht quiet (leise)
theatre - klein geschrieben
impress me - plural: nature and city
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Gasfamilie klingt makaber...
Gasfamilie ? ? ?
England austausch Bewerbung gut so?
Hello! My name is *** and I am thirteen years old. Together with my parents and my two years older brother, I live in a house with a big garden. We have got one little dog called ***. My hometown is ***. In my free time I often play football. Meeting friends like *** *** and surfing in the internet are also one of my favorite leisure activities. My favorite subjects are all languages. I am not so happy with subjects concerning to numbers like Maths and Physics. My family and my friends say about me that I am reliable, polite and I have a good behavior. Although I have travelled through many countries, I have never been in England before. For me the exchange would not only mean having fun but the possibility to make acquaintance with a new country and interesting people. I I would be very glad to take part at the exchange with ***(my school)
Hallo, ich habe am Dienstag meine mündliche Prüfung und wollte mal fragen ob hier jemand vielleicht meinen Text kontrollieren kann?
Today I want tell you something about Holidays. Personally when i get older I don't like travel to other countries because i'm so far away from my friends and i'm afraid to missing out important things. Anyway I travel with my family to different countries, in early life i travel to the Netherlands on a camping ground i can't tell anything about the trip because I can't remember. At the age of 6 i was in Turkey with my hole family, we were in Antalya we stay for 2 weeks. That was a nice time for me and everyone was happy. The hotel was so nice and we had such a great time together. There are so funny memories for example I was afraid of a taxi and we must drive with it to came to the city and it was a party taxi and my mother was sitting next to me and i said "mom you can move closer to me" i said this because i was so afraid. The weather was nice it was very hot and because of this i can't eat so much i dont know why and when we go to the dinner i'm only eating 5 or 6 pieces of melon. That was such a great time. When i was 14 I travel for the second time to turky and we were in the same Hotel, i was with my uncle and my aunt and 2 friends from my uncle. That was a nice time too, but I have noticed that something isn't good, i miss my friends and after four days or so i want back home because they told me on Whatsapp so great things what they did and that sounds so funny. But all in all it was a great trip to turkey. At the age of 15 my mom asks me whether I want to go to Italy with her and her partner. And i must be honest I have advised 2 weeks and asks my friends would you travel to italy if you were me and they said Joyce why you are thinking about that? Yes of course i would travel.. At the end my desicion was yes and i must say that i had a great time in Italy.. We drive with a bike trough the city, we took part in a guided tour of the city Sienna. And we saw many sights for example the leaning tower of pisa. In the easter Holidays i will travel to the north sea with my family and my best friend Joan. And i'm very glad because Joan is with us. And in the Summer Holidays i will travel to turkey with my mother and her partner, i hope we have a great time and i wont miss my friends so hardly. For me the best holidays were the summer holidays because you mustn't think on school and the wheather is actually nice. And when i dont travel to other countries i'm only on the way with my friends. We go swimming, or make a picnic sometimes we camping in the garden. All in all i can say that i love holidays.
Bitte um Korrektur text about myself
Im folgendem text sind sicherlich grammatikalische fehler. Ihr würdet mir sehr helfen wenn ihr mir helft. danke im vorraus :)
Let me just briefly introduce myself before I start to tell you about my life and my future plans. My name is .... . The letters of my name describe me best: self-confident, easygoing, loyal, independent, natural and ambitious. Currently I live in Cottbus and attend the 11 th grade at the Humboldt-Grammar-School. I am 16 years old and have the best family. I love my grandmothe, grandfather, mum, dad and my one year younger brother. I don’t remember when we have argued the last time. In my freetime I love to talk with my friends about all unimportant topics and go to parties but to be active is also very important to me. That’s why I try to go jogging regulary. In former times I was a member of different sports clubs, e.g. gymnastics or athletics. If I have nothing to do, this means no homework, nothing to learn or other aktivities I love to relax if I watch TV. My strength are in team skills, reliability and self-reliance. In addition I’m very sociable and cooperative. Some of my less great properties are listlessness and reticence. Furthermore you can describe me as reserved, because to entrust myself to someone is difficult for me. Hitherto school wasn’t a big problem for me. My strengths are in scientific subjects, this includes mathematics or chemistry. Difficult for me ist German because there is another weakness of me: spelling and grammar. Therefore English and Polish isn’t easy to me, too. Occupations like journalist or copyreader are out of the question very early.