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I visited the
High School, but now I'm on college. My stepbrother Patrick is in the
same age like me.
 

I visited an Highschool, but now I'm in college. My stepbrother Patrick is in the same grade as me.

Bei dem zweiten Teil des Satzes weiß ich nicht genau was du sagen wolltest. Falls du meintest das er in der gleichen Klassenstufe wie du bist, schreibt man es so, wie ich es oben geschrieben habe.




I don't figure it out, he told me

I didn't figure it out, he told me.


At the first moment it was a little bit
strange, because I didn't expected something like that.


At first it was a little bit
strange, because I didn't expected something like that.


I accepted it and I didn't had any problems with that.


I accepted it and I didn't have any problems with that.


Today you are a close friend for him


Today you are a close friend to him



He is an attentive friend and spends a lot of time
thinking of others, he scrutinize everything and everybody.


He is an attentive friend and spends a lot of time
thinking about others, he scrutinize everything and everybody.


[..], just because he has a few of problems


[..], just because he has a few problems


I would also describe him as a introverd person.

I would also describe him as an introverted person.


[..]I thought the whole time that you and Charlie will come togehter...

the whole time I thought that you and Charlie would get together.


S: Well, maybe it looked sometimes like that.

Well, maybe sometimes it looked like that.


S: No. As I said I'm now on college.

No. As I said I'm now in college.


But I decited to visit my family and Charlie as often I can.

But I decided to visit [...]

Du hast ein paar Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler, aber ansonsten ist das ein gutes Interview meiner Meinung nach. Es kann sein das ich einen Fehler übersehen habe, aber ich meine das waren alle :)


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cupcake2612 02.07.2017, 21:00

Supi, gerade noch rechtzeitig gesehen. Vielen Dank! :)

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Hi cupcake2612,

HanjiZoee hat schon einmal gute Arbeit geleistet, aber es gibt noch ein paar andere Sachen, die ich anmerken möchte:

I visited the High School, but now I'm on college.

I went to high school, but now I'm in college.

My stepbrother Patrick is in the same age like me.

My stepbrother Patrick and I are the same age.

Today you are a close friend for him.

Today you are a close friend of his.

he scrutinize everything and everybody.

he scrutinizes everything and everybody.

He is an attentive friend

He is a thoughtful friend (so sagen es Muttersprachler:) )

I don't think that I'm ready for a next realitionship

I don't think that I'm ready for another relationship

and let the things happen.

and let things happen.

Well, maybe it looked sometimes like that.

Well, maybe it looked a bit like that. (sometimes passt hier nicht ganz)

Do you have some plans for the future?

Do you have any plans for the future?

Everything is new and I have to accustom.

Everything is new and I have to adjust.

to visit my family and Charlie as often I can.

to visit my family and Charlie as often as I can.

Habe die letzten Monate in Irland gelebt :)

Viel Erfolg und gute Noten!

Cornflower

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