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Hi! Wäre lieb, wenn mir jemand diesen Text bzw Interview korrigieren könnte, es ist Teil eines Reading Journals, was wie eine halbe Arbeit zählt. Danke schon mal!Reporter: Hi Sam! I'm glad you are here. I would like to interview you.Sam: Hi. Okay, let's start!R: At first, can you tell me something about you?S: Sure. Well, my name is Sam and I'm 17 years old. I visited the High School, but now I'm on college. My stepbrother Patrick is in the same age like me. We get along very well. I'm glad to have him.R: So, how was your reaction when you figured out that he is/has been in a realtionship with Brad?S: I don't figure it out, he told me. I was the first person with whom he has talked about it. At the first moment it was a little bit strange, because I didn't expected something like that. But then it was okay. I accepted it and I didn't had any problems with that.R: You (and Patrick) met Charlie for the first time at the homecoming football game. Today you are a close friend for him. How would you describe him?S: From the beginning he was a very friendly and honest person, but a little bit shy. He is an attentive friend and spends a lot of time thinking of others, he scrutinize everything and everybody. He lives in his own little world. I think he knows more than he says. We shouldn't underestimate him, just because he has a few of problems. I would also describe him as a introverd person. I like him very much and hope that this friendship never ends. R: Do you love him?S: Yes, I love him as a friend , I really appreciate him. I don't love him in the sense of boyfriend. I just got out of a realtionship with a guy who cheated on me. I don't think that I'm ready for a next realitionship and to be honest, I don't want one at the moment. Now I will just concentrate on college and let the things happen.R: When I read the novel for the first time I thought the whole time that you and Charlie will come togehter...S: Well, maybe it looked sometimes like that.R: Do you have some plans for the future?S: No. As I said I'm now on college. Everything is new and I have to accustom. I don't know what the future will bring (for me). But I decited to visit my family and Charlie as often I can.R: Well, thank you for the great interview. All the best!
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