Australian - school of the Air
Wir schreiben bald eine Klassenarbeit über Australien.. Und da ich nicht gut bin in Texte schreiben wollte ich fragen ob ihr mir etwas helfen könnt ein Text über 'school of the air' zu schreiben :)
Ich hab auch ein paar Beispiele und die müsste ich halt in einen Text zusammen fassen und dabei brauche ich eure hilfe ;)
ADVANTAGES: - can have lessons outside - don't have to get up early every day - don't have to sit in a classeroom all day - school comes to students through their computer - it is quiet and students can learn better - teachers are far away
DISADVANTAGES: - can't meet their classmates every day - can be boring / lonely at home without classmates all day - have to learn for school on your own - parents are always there to make sure that you're working
Danke für eure Hilfe ist nähmlich echt wichtig :)
wenn wir dir das hier machen, lernst du nichts.
Dein Motto sollte Learning by doing sein, dann klappt's auch in der Englischarbeit!
Wenn du schon einmal in Vorleistung gehst und deinen Text hier zur Korrektur einstellst, wird man dir sicher gerne weiterhelfen.
Dazu benutzt du am besten ein gutes (online-) Wörterbuch, wie z.B. pons.eu, dict.cc, leo.org usw.
Kann jemand gut Englisch und diesen kurzen Text überlesen?
Hey, ich muss meiner Lehrerin einen Comment schreiben, per email. Hab da noch was dazu geschrieben. Wär nice wenn das jemand der gut englisch spricht das durchliest und mir sagt, ob es Fehler gibt/man was verbessern könnte und die Email angemessen für einen Lehrer ist.
Dear Mrs. , I was not sure if you wanted us to write the comment just about that text in the book (with a introduction and details about the text). So I just wrote my opinion down on that topic and included some of the arguments in the text.
Writing a comment – Young people in a multifaceted society
Many people think that our generation is anti-social, lazy and always on their phone. That might be true in some cases, but you can’t stereotype everyone just because of some people. Like every generation, there are lots of different kids and kind of people. There are extremes in every way. Teenagers steal, take drugs, don’t go to school and commit crimes, but also learn everyday more, get good grades, volunteer or work for charities, want to try new things and take part in demonstrations.
In every generation you can find similar people, but others describe and see us the way the mass acts. Most of us are insecure and don’t know how to deal with changes, their life in general and the expectations of their parents, families and friends. We are trying to grow up like every human before us, questioning our existence, purpose and matter of life.
The Internet, (social) media and the digitalisation in general make these questions particularly important. We have the opportunity to share our opinion with a great mass, but we also can influence them and in reverse, without us noticing it.
Such a conflict is new to humanity, there might be similarities to other problems in worlds history but we don’t know where to set limits or make rules for it. We are unsure about what is wrong and what is right, especially in this case, so many people don’t know what to think about a lot of important topics. Some try to make things legit, using the arguments (of different philosophies). They don’t think or even care about nature, animals or humans, their lives or rights. Since generations we are destroying the earth and taking all the resources, not caring about the people that will be born in the future and will have to deal with all the trouble and problems that we caused.
That sounds pretty pessimistic, but it’s the truth. In my opinion, the only main things improving with our generation and what we are changing right now are discrimination, sexism, racism and so on. Maybe we are far away from getting equality and the same (human) rights for everyone in the world, but at least we have the luck to be in the position to have a good(?) education and the access to a massive amount of information (Internet, library, school). (geht weiter in den Antworten)
Könnt ihr mir meinen Text korrigieren und mir sagen was ich noch ergänzen kann?
danke im Voraus!
Many people think that teenagers need rules. Some of them do not agree with it. Do teenagers really need rules? In the following comment I will discuss whether rules are necessary or not.
First of all, they get used to it when the parents have certain rules or when parents forbid the children something, because at some point they don't feel like arguing anymore or they realize themselves that it is wrong.
Moreover, they also learn where the limits are and that you just can't pass and ignore it. For example, having a boyfriend at 15 or 16 is not important, because it quickly puts them in the role of an adult. It may be too stressful, so they can't handle the consequences of their doing.
In contrast to this, children at this age become very emotional and become jealous of friends who may have a boyfriend. They may hate their parents for not being allowed to have a boyfriend.
On the one hand, teenagers must learn to take responsibility and take care of themselves. They also have to learn to know the difference between right and wrong.
In conclusion one can say that rules aren't important for the teenagers, because they have learned how to take care of themselves. But teenagers can seem disrespectful, because they don't know their own limits anymore and think that they can do it better than parents, which represent my opinion about the topic.
Ist dieser Englisch text richtig?
Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun.I strongly believe that all students and teaching staff are looking for winter holiday because it is a break for we all. We can have more free time to do what we want during this period of time. We can sleep and stay up as long as we want to and don’t need to worry about getting up late for class the next day morning.
Ich habe kein gutes Englisch, könnte sich das jemand durchlesen bitte?
However, you can be involved in the development of your children, as they can say mommy or walk for the first time, for example. With yours you would also have a conversation partner at your side at all times.
With a high school education you don't have time to make social contacts, because you have many working hours, so you don't have anyone to talk to about your problem
Englischer Text: Verbesserung?.y?
Für müssen in Englisch die angegebenen Ideen begründen, wie man die Schule gesünder gestalten kann und eie man diese umsetzen kann.
Kann jemand die folgenden Sätze korrigieren bzw. noch erwähnen, was ich sonst noch dazu sagen kann? Ich muss die einzelnen Punkte noch besser ausformulieren.
1. Ban all students from coming to school by car
- not realizable, because a lot of students live several kilometers away from school in small villages with bad bus connections. For that reason the pupils have no opportunity to get to school. Most students would also pay no attention to the decision and would just park in a street thats close to school.
2. introduce a compulsory sport lesson every day
- That's a good idea, because the students have to sit all the time, when they're in school. The sport lessons give them a opportunity to run and get rid of excess energie. After the sport lessons they will be fit again and can learn better. But the grades can also get worse. The students have to stay 5 hours a week longer in school, have less time to learn and make home works.
3. Remove all snack vending machines
- not good, because the students will buy their sweets somewhere else, for example in a supermarket, if the school remove all machines. Instead of that the school can build machines with food that is more healthy, like joghurt or fruits.