Ich muss ein Text auf English über London schreiben. Wer kann von euch gut Englisch und könnte meinen Text kurz mal so ein bisschen korrigieren?
I will speak about London London is a big city in the southeast of England. It is the capital of England and the United Kindom. million people live in London. London is the biggest city in the United Kondom and in the western Europe. It is the world's largest financial centre. For a long time London was a small city. London was founded by the Romans in AD 43 and called Londinium which was later shortened to London. For a long time, London was a small city. All its people lived inside the walls that were built by the Romans. This area is still called the City of London. There were many villages around the city. Gradually, more and more people came to live there. Then the villages joined together into one huge city, which is now called "London" or Greater London. Most people in London are British. However, London also has many immigrants. These people come from many different countries. They speak many different languages and have different religions and cultures. There are also many people from different countries who stay in London on business. Many people visit London as tourists. They may see the famous Sights of London. For example The Londoner Eye, Buckingham Palaca,Big Ben,Tower Bridge, Palace of Westminster and many more. The London Eye is 135 meters high and you can see if you're so high up to 25 miles in any direction. The Buckingham Palace is the residence of the Queen of England and is in the center of London. The Big Ben is a tower with a large bell. The tower is 96.3 meters high and the bell weight 13,8 tons. The Tower Bridge is one of the most famous bridges in the world, over the River Thames. For special large ships the middle two bridge parts are opened. The Palace of Westminster is also known as the Houses of Parliament, because the British parliament is in the building.
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