Hallo, könnte mir bitte jemand Tips in Hinblick zur Rechtschreibung/ Grammatik geben zu diesem Text? Danke :)
Will Freeman is a 36-year-old man, who lives alone in his flat in London. He is single, child-free, has neither family nor a job and Will had never worked before, because he doesn't need to: His father wrote the One-Hit-Wonder “Santa's Super Sleigh”, from which Will today can earn enough money to live. Will has everyday a lot of time to fill, so he split the days up to units of time. With the aids of several units he fills his day with reading, taking a bath, watching television, tidying up the flat or meeting friends. Will is always informed about what is in and modern, Will himself thinks he is a real cool guy. He listens to musicians like Nirvana and Snoop Dos, drives a fast car and sometimes he even takes some soft drugs. Aside from that, Will likes to meet women, which feelings he can exploit to get some sex. He is not interested in long-lasting relationships, or even in having children: He simply dislikes them. Will always tries to avoid every real problems and never had any.
After he had a short relationship with the single mother Angie, he thinks that he would need to meet more single mothers to have more uncomplicated relationships, like his last one with Angie. Therefore he invents his own two-year-old son “Ned”, so that he can visit a meeting with SPAT(Single Parents Alone Together). There he meets the beautiful single mother Suzie, with whom he goes to the park together with Suzie's daughter and Marcus. After the trip Will gets faced to real problems at Marcus' home, where they find Fiona after she tried to commit suicide. But Will doesn't really feel with them: He is rather an observer on the outside.
After the dead-duck-day Will often thinks about Marcus and Fiona and concludes, that he needs to help them somehow. Therefore they all meet once for lunch and later Marcus starts to visit Will every afternoon after school. At the beginning Will doesn't want to be visited, but by the time he learns that this is a way he can help Marcus. They start to watch television together and past a little time they start to have proper conversations about Fiona or Marcus' trouble at school and Will feels good to give advice to Marcus and to help him to be be a normal kid.
On New Year's eve Will falls in love with Rachel. Will never expected to fall in love with a woman, because he never wanted to, but he really has a crush on Rachel. To make himself, the unemployed and family-free man more interesting, he tells her that he has a twelve-year-old son called Marcus. Will meets Rachel again and again and again and for him, Rachel starts to get very important. He really wanst her to be his girlfriend – to be with her all the time. Also Rachel's son Ali becomes important for him. But soon, Will recognizes that lies aren't a good basis for a serious relationship and for this reason the tells Rachel the truth about Marcus. He doesn't want to be d