1.songtext (Langeweile im Auto) Meinung?

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Der Refrain ist etwas kryptisch und wird auch durch die Strophen nicht klarer. Inhaltsleere kann okay sein, wenn die Melodie das wieder wettmacht. Viele aktuelle Titel in den Charts sind aber auch nicht "besser", auch da wird der Inhalt bewusst vage gehalten, damit sich die Zuhörer besser damit identifizieren können.

die zweite strophe ist inhaltlich und vom Ausdruck her okay, die erste und letzte finde ich dagegen nicht so gut gelungen. Man weiß nicht so richtig, was du mit dem lied ausrücken willst, also was eigentlich die Message ist. Auch hier wieder: Inhaltsleere muss nichts schlechtes sein, weil es viel Raum für Interpretation gibt und mit einer schönen Melodie kaschiert werden kann. Aber meinen persönlichen Geschmack triffst du damit nicht.

Und Rechtschreibung ist auch noch so eine Baustelle...

Eigentlich gar nicht so schlecht 👌🏽 Nur die Länge der einzelnen Verse passen meist nicht zu den sich reimenden Versen, so entsteht irgendwie ein Ungleichgewicht. Vielleicht kannst du ein paar Wörter weglassen oder bei den kurzen Versen ein paar Füllwörter dazu tun. :) Mann kann's sich jetzt aber auch schwer vorstellen, da wir ja die Melodie und den Rhythmus nicht kennen.

Ist der Liebesbrief so ok?

Hallo erstmal :) Also wir sind jetzt seit fast zwei Jahren zusammen (jetzt beide 16 Jahre alt) und ich schreibe ihm immer mal wieder so kleine Liebesnachrichten und diesmal hab ich halt eine etwas längere geschrieben und wollte wissen wie ihr sie findet. Es tut mir leid dass es in Englisch ist aber er kann nicht so gut deutsch. Danke schon mal :)

i want you to know that in the last year I've fallen deeply in love with you. there are no words to express the feeling I feel in my heart that you came into my life, and how you make every day you’re with me so special. you are my absolutely everything but you know that <3 You are my best friend, my one true love, my one and only. I love you more today than I did yesterday, and I'll love you more tomorrow than I do today it’s incredible i cant even believe its possible to love you more than i already do but you make the impossible possible <3 Loving you is the only thing that makes life worth living. Day by day, my love for you becomes overwhelming, and I can't handle it when I don't see or even talk to you every day. A day without you in my life is like a day without sunshine, a day without food, or a day without air. I need you when I’m cold to keep me warm; I need you in the rain to keep me dry; I need you in my life to keep me happy. You make me feel wonderful. You give me strength when I just can't carry on and I truly treasure that. Every moment spent together is another one of my dreams coming true. I'm afraid I'll say something to make you forget the feelings you have for me when I bring up stupid things. I'm worried you won‘t want me anymore cause love you with everything I have. I was scared to love you at first, out of fear that you would hurt me, but I did and it’s the best thing I’ve ever done. Now, the only fear I have is waking up and realizing it’s all a dream. You are the most wonderful thing that has ever happened to me. Each moment that you and I spend together is so magical that I catch myself smiling for no reason at all. I thought that I would never find a love that is as strong as ours, cause there were times i never even believed anyone could ever love me i was fat ugly and everybody hated me but then you came along and changed my life :*** Baby, you complete me. You make my life so amazing and my world is a better place to be because of you. You make me feel beautiful. Thank you for giving me so much more than I ever could have wanted. I am so thankful for what we have, and for everything we will have. I could never imagine what it would be like if we were to lose each other. I don't even want to think about it. All I want to think of is you. I hope that message wasn't all too long :P

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Englisch Aufsatz okay?

Ich gehe in die 9. Klasse & bin Realschüler. Wir müssen in Englisch einen Aufsatz über unseren Traumberuf schreiben, habt ihr villt. Verbesserunsvorschläge? ^^

My dream profession

My dream profession is to work in a hospital as a children's nurse. I want to do this job because I like to help children. For this job you must be mentally stable (psychisch belastbar), responsible (verantwortungsbewusst) and careful. In this profession you care and watch babies, sick children and young people. You have to work on weekends and in shifts. You work in nursing homes, children's hospitals, university hospitals and medical practices (Facharztpraxen). For this job you must wear a special uniform. Important school subjects are biology, chemistry, mathematics, physics and German. In my opinion, the pay is good. You deserve between 2338 and 2770 euro in a Month. Not so good is, that you had to stand for a long time but I think that's no problem for me.

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englisch- two minute talk- my personal road ahead

Hallo meine Lieben! Ich muss am Mittwoch eine mündliche prüfung über das thema zukunft wie auch bewerbung machen. nun muss ich einen two minute talk über das thema my road ahead machen und wollte wissen was ihr so von dem haltet und ob ihr verbesserungsvorschläge habt :)

Today I’d like to talk about my road ahead so I will tell you, how I’m looking toward to my future. I’ve chosen this topic because, in my opinion, it’s important to think about this and to get clear what I really want to reach and how I imagine my future. I’d like to divide my talk into 4 parts and now, in my first part I want to take a look at my left school time so I will tell you what I want to reach in the left 3 and a half years of school. In this time, I want to get good marks respectively plenty of points during my A-Level with the aspiration getting a lot of acceptances for study places, what brings me very quickly to my second part, where I want you to tell something about my study period, so for example where I want to live during this time. I’m looking forward studying marketing management as a dual study in Düsseldorf because I’m interested in this field of publicity. I decided to live in Düsseldorf because I love this city and the other reason is that I’m near to my family. Then, with a good friend, I decide to live together in a flat share because it isn’t as much as expensive if you’re living in a big flat alone. After my study time I want to work as a marketing manager what brings me to my third part where I want you to tell something about my work aims and how I imagine my hopefully job. As a marketing manager you have to know how to sell products like shoes, dresses or cars and you have to make these products attractive for the costumers. All in all you can say about this job, that you have to promote for different kinds of products. It is important to mention, that I want to live abroad in big cities, let me give you some examples, like Paris or New York City because I’m in love with them. I expect from the job that it is a diversity and also creative job. And my last point is about my personal aims, so if I want to get a family or for example an animal. And this both questions I can answer with the statement yes, because it is my biggest dream getting a family with an attractive man next to me and two children, equal if this will be boys, girls or both. I also want to get a little teacup pig because they’re very cute. I’d like to finish my presentation by summarizing that I want to be a successful worker and a good mum with a lot of aims and that I want to live abroad. That brings me to the end of my presentation, thanks for listening.

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Kann mir jemand den deutschen songtext in deutsch übersetzten, bitte?

I never noticed how my heart could beat so loud When I think of you And I can't focus now, got my head up in the clouds When I think of you My heart's so lost in all the chaos It's got me crazy With the spell you cast, it all happened so fast Goodbye to loneliness And when I close my eyes, you play like a movie in my mind

You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer and You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer? Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

Everything you do is so fresh and brand new That I can't help This crush on you, I wanna be the breakthrough Kind of love to you Sparks are flying like butterflies and I'm so high On the spell you cast, it all happened so fast Goodbye to loneliness And when I close my eyes, you play like a movie in my mind And I wanna rewind, over and over a thousand times

You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer and You are the star of my daydreams Everything you are is my reverie Can you feel my heart when you're moving closer and closer? Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be Oh I think that we, that we were meant to be

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Rap/Hip-Hop Empfehlungen?

Hi. Ich hab mir vor kurzem Deezer geholt und bin noch auf der Suche nach guten Künstlern und Tracks. Was gefällt euch im Moment so? Habt ihr Empfehlungen für mich? Deutscher ob amerikanischer Rap ist mir egal. Ich mag vieles, bin relativ offen, wobei mir jeglicher Straßenrap eher weniger gefällt. Aber ich kann mich auch für diese Trap/Autotune/Dancehall Schiene begeistern, mag es aber auch wenn es besonders anspruchsvolle oder ausgefallene Texte sind. Habt ihr da was für mich? Danke schon mal im vorraus.

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