Kann vielleicht jemand mal einen englischen Text über Las Vegas von mir verbessern?
Hey. Ich muss morgen in Englisch einen 1 Minute langen Vortrag über etwas in der Usa halten : Las vegas. Vll. kann ja mal Jemand mein Text verbessern. Wäre total nett.
Las Vegas was foundet on 25 May 1905. Today Las vegas is with 558. 000 residents the largest city in the U.S state Navada. She is known for their many casinos. for the most people english is the main language, the other people speaking spanish. Las vegas is a popular resort. Every year about tree million tourists are travel to Las Vegas. Many tourists make trips to Hoover Dam , he located south of Las Vegas on the Colorado River. Many Las Vegas tourist make trips to the Grand Canyon too. >>>Bild <<< "Welcome to Fobulous Las vegas" is an illuminated shield in Las Vegas.
Ich nehme "jospes" Korrektur zur Grundlage meiner Korrektur.
Las Vegas was founded on May 25 th, [...) 1905. Today this city has a population of about nearly 560.000 people. las vegas is the largest city in the state of Nevada. It is known for its many casinos. Most of the people in las vegas (...) speak English, but the Spanish language is also used. Every year about 3 million people (...) travel to las vegas. A lot of them (...) go to (..) famous Hoover Dam, (...) it dams up the Colorado River and thus forms (..)Lake Mead (...). Many tourists make a trip to the fantastic and **famous Grand Canyon (...)
"welcome to fabulous las vegas" (...) an illuminated (..) sign reads in las vegas.
Jospes Tastatur scheint keine Großbuchstaben zu kennen; die present progressive forms are speaking, are travelling usw. dürfen hier nicht verwendet werden, da du hier allgemeine Tatsachen beschreibst und keine Handlungen, die im Augenblick geschehen. Korrektur: fett = korrigiert bzw. eingefügt; (...) = gestrichen
There are travelling about three million tourists to Las Vegas every year.
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Today Las vegas is the largest city in the U.S state Navada with 558. 000 residents.
Der Text ist nicht schlecht. Ich würde jedoch einiges verbessern: Las Vegas was founded on May 25, 1905... It ist well known... For most people... others speak spanish. Every year about three million tourists travel to... ...make trips to the Hoover Dam, which is located... ..."Welcome to fabulous Las Vegas" is an illuminated sign in Nevada.
las vegas was founded on may 25 th in 1905. today this city has a population about nearly 560.000 people. las vegas is the largest city in the state of nevada. it is known for many casinos. most of the people in las vegas are speaking english, but the spanish language is also used. everey year about 3 million people are traveling to las vegas. a lot of them are going to the famous hoover dam, not far away situated in the lake mead and the colorado river. many tourists make a trip to the fantastic and famosu grand canyon area.
"welcome toi fabolous las vegas" is an illuminated shield in las vegas.