Findet jemand einen Fehler in meinen Englischen Handout?
Hallo zusammen. :) Ich halte am Montag eine Wochenreportage im Fach Englisch und muss dabei ein Handout erstellen. Findet jemand einen Fehler in dem Handout? Falls ihr mir irgendwelche Tipps dazu geben könntet wäre ich echt dankbar :D Lg, stazzy :) Weekly Report -Visit of the syrian president Assad to Moscow *Putin is now the chief sponsor of president Assad *Discussion about military actions in Syria concerncing the fight against terrorist extremist groups like e.g. ISIS *Thanking Russia for the assistance *Putins: 'There have been lately some positive results' -70 hostages were liberated in Hawija *1 American was killed in this operation *Involved U.S. and Kurdish special troops *Operation came more than 1 month after Kurdish security forces reported that Isis kidnapped a dozen men near hawija -Hilary Clinton testifies on 2012 Benghasi Consulate attack *Raid led to deaths of ambassador Chris Stevens and three other US embassy staff *She was secretary of state at this time *Party describes it as witch-hunt to harm her presidential bid -Bastian Schweinsteiger is to take legal actions against a toy company *Company made a nazi doll with a face that looks like Schweinsteiger *The firm even called the doll Bastian *employe of the company claimed that they thought that every german looks like that *Patrick Chan insisted that it was a complete coincidence that the doll looks like him *The doll called WWII Army Supply Duty costs 120 € *The doll has different outfits →One version of this doll includes the „Wehrmachtsadler“ which is an eagle with a swastika above the right breast pocket
Könntet ihr bitte einen Blick draufwerfen,ob es keine Grammatikfehler und so drinne sind. Währe echt net.Danke im Vorraus. The topic of my presentation is London.Ich've taken London,because it is a beautiful city.I want to talk about the following points: Geography Big Ben London Eye Tower Bridge Buckinham Palace London is the capital of England. The city is located on the island of Great Britain. London has 7.8252 million Peoples.London is one of the main cultural, financial and trade centers of the world. In the city there are many universities, schools, theaters and museums. Big Ben: Big Ben is one of the most famous landmarks of London. The tower has 5 bells. Big Ben is the largest bell. Its weight is 13.5 tons. Originally, "Big Ben" was the name of the bell and not of the whole tower. But today we call the whole tower Big Ben. The tower has 4 dials. Every clock face has a diameter of 7 metres. The minute hand has a length of 4.3 metres and the hour hand is 2.7 metres long. This makes it the second largest clock of Great Britain. The clock celebrated its 150th birthday in May 2009. In the tower is already the second bell. (The bell in the tower is not the original one anymore but a second one.) London Eye: The London Eye is the biggest Ferris wheel in Europe and was designed by architects David Marks and Julia Barfield. The construction of the wheel was in 1998. Because a technical problems the opening times moved for visitors and opened in 2000 to celebrate the millennium. The London eye is 135 meter high with 32 capsules.The wheel spins slowly and takes for a turn about 30-40 minutes. Buckingham Palace The Buckingham palace is the home of the Kings and Queens .Now Queen Elizabeth II is living there. The Buckingham palace have over 600 rooms, a cinema, an own post office, a swimmingpool and a very big garden.. For a long time only special persons could go into the palace. But since the 7. August 1993 it has been allowed to visit some rooms in the palace. Tower bridge The Tower Bridge is a road bridge over the River Thames in London. It was opened in 1894. Over the bridge carries the main road. The Tower Bridge is a bascule bridge was built. It has eight years needed to build the Tower Bridge.
Hallo. Ich hab am Dienstag eine Englisch Arbeit, in der ich einen Match Repot schreiben muss. Ich wollte euch einfach nach meinungen für meinen Report bitten: The match report At the 19th October, on Sunday, was the first match of the year. Bristol South against Redcliffe. The match was at Redcliffe's ground. The first half began slowly and finished 0-0. The secound half was faster than the first half. Redcliffe made lots of mistakes, because of that it was just a question of time, till Bristol South shot a goal. Finally Bristol South's best player, Tim Hooley, scored the goal and the final score was Bristol South 1 and Redcliffe 0. Danke schonmal
Welches Buch ist zum Englisch "lernen" zu empfehlen?
Guten Abend, ich habe meinen BEC (Business English Certificate - Preliminary ) mit gut 75% bestanden. Nun möchte ich mein Englisch noch weiter verbessern. Ich habe mir bereits die ersten 6 Staffeln von How I met your mother? bestellt und gucke bereits pro Woche 3-4 Folgen. Also mein Englisch-Niveau liegt dann bei B1. Welches Buch könnt ihr mir empfehlen? (Ich, 20 Jahre jung, Fußballer, Action, kein Liebesdrama bitte :D) Was ist mit "The hunger games"? Wie ist das vom Niveau her? Ich möchte auch Spaß beim Lesen haben, sonst schmeiß ich das Buch ja sofort wieder in die Ecke ;-)
Ist das richtiges Englisch?ergeben die sätze sinn?
The surname Voight they took off later and called himself only Angelina Jolie.She wanted to make it clear so that it can stand on its own and does not need the name of her famous father, in order to succed. In addition, at that time there was a very bad relationship with her father Jon, who left the family early on, as Angie was still very small. The marriage of her parents was at first very happy.First got Angelina's brother James Haven Voight,who was born on May 11,1973rd Two years later come Angelina.But the marriage broke up and the father left the family
Englisch Hausaufgaben Verbesserung
Könntet ihr folgenden Text bitte korrigieren?? How do you feel about this song? When I listened for the first time to Beyonce´s song “Proud to be an American”, I recognized that the melody and the rhythm are very catchy. You can distinctly hear the hymn-character the performer has given her song and the idea to combine lyrics and melody to convince the listener of your opinion. I do not like this kind of forcing you into a specific opinion. I prefer artists who animate you to form your own point of view or at least make you think about the topic in general. Moreover, the strong opinionated message of pride and patriotism is repulsive to me. In my experience pride, as long as you use it to feel self-confident and motivated, can be a good character trait, but too much of it can block your view. No one could deny that this is proofed not only in the History frequently, this thought is also often covered by literature, movies etc. In relation to the topic of Beyonce´s song, this means, that you should not just praise America to the skies. There are also not so commendable sides of the “Country of liberty”. Instead of this homage to the bright sides of America the singer should more directly mention that this country is too beautiful and stand for too much to let it destroy by political and societal problems. On the other hand I am impressed by the directness of her opinion about America. Such a passionate patriotic message is not very often seen in Europe, especially in Germany. Patriotism can be good for a nation, because it supports the cohesion and the mood in the society. Maybe Germany should finally, ages after World War Two, start to build up a healthy Patriotism and Pride of their country. Summary “Proud to be an American” is a in 2008 re-released cover by the famous patriotic American song “God bless the USA” by the R&B singer Beyonce. Beyonce expresses in her patriotic song, that you should count one´s blessings, in this case the unimpeachable freedom America has given to her, even if everything else would have been taken away from you. With this and by reminding the listeners of the all the people who died in past acts for the liberty she can thankfully enjoy nowadays, the praises the whole American attitude of life: The priority of being more or less free to do whatever you want and act independent. Especially in the refrain and the second stanza Beyonce shows the deeply in the American history rooted pride for their whole country and it´s symbols. Just like the all- American moral concept is even God asked for his blessing and peace for the nation. In this song are all listeners called up to be proud of America, and express that patriotism passionated, as well as trying to keep the country worth for this and protect it as good as you can.
Passt meine englische grammtik so in briefe schreiben? - Beschreibung :)
Hey, Also hier war die aufgabe: Email the George Hotel in Eastbourne. 1 Book a double room and a single room from August 29th - september 1st; you want B&B only. 2 Your questions: cost? deposit? car park? far to the sea? Mein brief: Dear Sir or Madam, I´m glad that you have rooms available and I would like to book one double room and one single room for my parents and me for three nights. We´ll arrive on Thursday August 29th and we´ll leave on Sunday September 1st. We would like breakfast every day. Could you please tell me if we should pay a deposit? And could you tell me if the hotel has a car park? How much is it? And is the hotel far to the sea? Yours faithfully, Wasser1799 Passt das von der grammatik her so oder muss man da noch was verbessern??? PS: ich habe we will einfach we´ll geschrieben da wir in der shcule IMMER nur diese abkürzungen schreiben.
Englischfrage: sehr wichtogt?
Okok, das müsste WIRKLICH die letzte Frage sein, die ich zu sowas stellen werde. Der Satz: "Hawaii hatte eine immer bessere Beziehung zu den United States, da sie u.B auch Waren, wie Ananas oder Zucker zollfrei zu ihnen transportieren konnten." Ich würde sagen: " Hawaii had (?richtige zeitform?!) a better and better relation to the us, because they could transport products, like pineapples or sugar, free of duty into the states." Bin mir wirklich sehr unsicher ob das richtig ist
Ist die Summary zu "How India Became America" so ok?
Hallo ihr lieben Leute, ich wollte euch fragen, ob diese Summary zu dem Zeitungsartikel "How India became America" so ok ist. (http://www.nytimes.com/2012/03/11/opinion/sunday/how-india-became-america.html) Ich wollte fragen ob ich was ergänzen, oder weglassen soll. Ich habe bemerkt, dass sich der Satzbau immer wieder wiederholt. Wie kann man das gut möglichst ändern? Außerdem wollt ich wissen, ob der Text von der Struktur her so ok ist (er ist zurzeit so wie der Zeitungsartikel aufgebaut, oder ob man ihn aspektgeleitet strukturieren solle. Dann wollte ich noch fragen, ob man "Then the author goes on naming..." (auf den Satzbau bezogen) so schreiben darf, weil es sich meiner Meinung nach komisch anhört. Ist der Satzbau "Furthermore, the author mentions..." so richtig? Oder eher "Futhermore does the author mention..." ? (auch bei Moreover) Vielen Dank schon mal im Voraus! Viele Grüße
Englische mündliche Prüfung (Ein paar Themen wurden uns vorgelegt - siehe unten)
Ich habe am Montag die mündliche Prüfung und ich habe mich schon darauf vorbereitet. Da ich nicht sehr schlagfertig und spontan bin, habe ich mir schon halbwegs ein paar Antworten überlegt (Die ich natürlich nicht auswendig lerne, sondern zum groben Überblick geschrieben habe.) Ich würde euch gerne bitten, meine Texte durchzulesen und etwas zu ergänzen - Vorschläge? Vielen Dank!:) First of all I want to introduce myself: My name is Lena X I am seventeen years old and was born in X. Currently, I’m living in X since 12 years. Previously, I lived in X for about 5 years. My mom’s name is X and my father is called X. Both of them are X years old. My sister’s name is MX. She is X years old and is currently living in Australia, Melbourne, because she wants to “Work and Travel” there. She has to do some fruit picking for 3 months so that she can stay there for one further year. My uncle is living in Florida and my grandaunt in California. I am going to visit them in the summer holidays. I think I would rather live in the USA or another foreign country than living in Germany because many of my family members are living abroad. Free Time Activities: In my leisure time I like to meet with my friends. We often drive to Hamburg and go to the cinema, go out to dinner or ice-cream and sometimes shopping. Additionally, I go to the Fitness Centre three times a week with some of my friends. Mostly from 6pm to 8pm. I train my arms and legs and I just want to stay healthy. (It costs about 30 euro including the price for drinks, so you can drink as much as you want.) Holiday: Personally, in my holidays I want to travel as much as possible. I want to gain many experiences and learn about several cultures or countries because in my opinion it is insanely interesting how other people live and what they so or what their habits are. It is important to me that the hotel room is clean and the food tastes good. ** Fashion:** I prefer to wear ordinary clothes. I don’t have a special taste but mostly I wear skinny jeans and normal shirts or pullovers. Moreover I like H&M and Adidas. These are one of my favourite brands though I don’t mind if I wear clothes from special brands. Detached House: Nosy neighbors, no shops, long way to school, need a car Garden/nature, quiet, clean air, nice area Block Of Flats: Loud, lots of traffic, pollution, many neighbours, Good shopping facilities, cinemas, no gardening, public transport Single: Party, date anyone, enough time for yourself, to be able to afford an own house perhaps You could be lonely, Married: You may have children, you are not lonely, to be able to afford house You might haven’t enough time for yourself, you cannot work because of your children, School Uniforms - Advantages: Everyone looks equal (poor pupils don’t have to worry about it), you don’t have to think about what you want to wear, Disadvantages: You cannot show that you’re individual, you cannot wear clothes what you want to wear
Englisch mit eigener Leistung :)
Zu viele Alkohol kann das Gehirn komplett zerstören Too much alcohol can destroy the brain Das Problem ist kaum lösbar The problem is hardly solvable Leider trinken viele Tennager regelmäßige Sprirituosen Unfortunaly, many young people are often drinking spriritousen Am wochenende saufen auche junge Mädchen in PUbs und discos At the weekend young girls are drinking in pubs and discos. Jugendliche die häufig besoffen sind, sind meistens aggressiv Joung people who are often sloshed, are also often aggressiv Alkoholl ist immer wieder die Ursache von Gewalt auf den Straßen Alcohol is often the cause of force in the streets. In Großbritanien sah man vor einige Jahren selten asoziales Verhalten in Großbritanien you could see anti-social behaviour for any years Die Situation ist in einigen Städten generell außer Kontrolle geraten The situation in some towns are getting out of control Würde mich freuen, wenn jemand diese Sätze kontrollieren könnte. Ich weiß, dass mein Englisch sehr schlecht ist. Übe aber. Mit der Grammatik habe ich noch Probleme. Hat vielleicht jemand Tipps, wie man das lernen kann ?
Hilfe Englisch with "to"?
Also der folgende Satz muss mit "to" gebildet werden. Arnold Schwarzenegger: one of the most sucessful Hollywood action film stars, youngest person who ever won the Mr. Universe title. --- Daraus muss jetzt ein Satz with "to" gebildet werden. Ist das hier richtig?: "Arnold Schwarzenegger, one of the most sucessful Hollywood action film stars, was the youngest person to win the Mr. Universe title." Iwie hört sich das falsch an...
Wie könnte ich diese Englisch-Übersetzung verbessern?
Hallo, Ich schreibe bald eine Englischarbeit und wollte mal meinen Text hier lassen und fragen ob ihr Verbesserungen für mich habt, ich freue mich über jede Antwort:) Also: I would also like to live in Australia later. There are so many beautiful sights there. One of the most beautiful sights, I think, is in Sydney. The Sydney Opera House or the Shark Bay. The landscape with sandy beaches and the red earth and the blue sea... There are so many things in Australia, among other thinks , there is also the Harbour Bridge. It is like the opera in Sydney. There you can take so much, z.B. : go shopping, swimming, go hiking in the Blue Mountains... I think Australia is a beautiful country, and I could imagine it, even to live there. Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen:) LG
Summary "The Land Lady" : Bitte mal drüber lesen ;)
Hey :) Ich habe eine Summary zu der Kurzgeschichte "The Land Lady" von Roald Dahl geschrieben und bräuchte jemand der mal für mich drüber liest. :) Bitte auch nicht nur auf Grammatik udn Rechtschreibfehler achten sondern auch auf Inhalt usw. Danke schonmal ;) In the following I´m going to summarize the short story "The Land Lady" written by Roald Dahl. Seventeen year-old Billy Weaver has to take a journey from London to Bath for giving a report due to his work at London Head Office. Arrived in Bath, Billy asks the porter for a good and cheap hotel to stay the night. The porter recommends "The Bell and Dragon". On his way to the hotel, Billy notices a lovely decorated house, which he likes at first moment. As he finds a printed notice with the inscription "BED AND BREAKFAST" he can´t walk away and presses the bell. A nice mid-forty woman opens. Owing to the cheap price, Billy chooses to stay. Thus the woman shows him parts of the house including his room. She also wants him to sign the guest book before going to sleep. While drinking a cup of tea with the land lady, Billy notices that the book got only two entries by men, whose names sound familiar to him. Further those entries are about two and three years old. Besides he remembers the mens´names from newspaper articles he read. The story ends with Billy asking the land lady if she ever had any other guests except the two man. Finally she answered that he was the only guest.