Wie kann man folgenden englischen Satz komplexer machen?
One day she stole a car. She got caught. She went to jail. Mom was devastated. --- geht das ? ---> One day she stole a car as soon as she got caught so going to jail Mom was devastated. Auf andere Vorschläge bin ich gespannt. Danke.
Nee, hört sich nicht so gut an!
Versuch das: One day she stole a car, she got caught and went to jail, her mom was devasted.
Deine "Verknüpfung" ist unorganisch und unlogisch.
Aber so zum Beispiel wäre es möglich: "After stealing a car, she was soon caught by the police, and her mom was devastated when (/that) she was sent to jail."
One day she stole a car but got caught soon after. She was arrested and went to jail. Her mom was utterly devastated by the news.
Nein. Sry. Aber das ergibt keinen Sinn...
A little after she stole a car one day she got caught and went to jail leaving her mother devastated.