Frage von lateinchiller, 33

Wie kann man folgenden englischen Satz komplexer machen?

One day she stole a car. She got caught. She went to jail. Mom was devastated. --- geht das ? ---> One day she stole a car as soon as she got caught so going to jail Mom was devastated. Auf andere Vorschläge bin ich gespannt. Danke.

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von MissUnknown2014, 3

One day she stole a car but got caught soon after. She was arrested and went to jail. Her mom was utterly devastated by the news.

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von Ewwas17, 6

Nein. Sry. Aber das ergibt keinen Sinn...

Vlt.

A little after she stole a car one day she got caught and went to jail leaving her mother devastated.

Expertenantwort
von earnest, Community-Experte für Englisch & Grammatik, 5

Deine "Verknüpfung" ist unorganisch und unlogisch.

Aber so zum Beispiel wäre es möglich: "After stealing a car, she was soon caught by the police, and her mom was devastated when (/that) she was sent to jail."

Gruß, earnest

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von huehnchenhase20, 1

Nee, hört sich nicht so gut an! 

Kommentar von huehnchenhase20 ,

Versuch das: One day she stole a car, she got caught and went to jail, her mom was devasted.

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