Summary in Englisch ..
Hallo ich bin nicht gerade so gut in englisch deswege wollte ich mal fragen welche fehler in meiner vorlage für eine summary sind, ich bin führ jede hilfe dankbar. . .The story is about the changing relationships between the two American children and an Aboriginal boy as they make their way through the Australian desert. Mary and Peter stranded in the Australian outback after a plane crash. They stranded without knowlegde of how to find food in the desert .Their chances look bad until they meet a 16 years old aboriginal boy . The aboriginal boy is on his walkabout . Walkabout is a aboriginal tradition which one makes a child to a man . bitte sagt mir wenn es fehler gibt
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Hallo,
The story is about the changing relationship between the two American children and an aboriginal boy as they make their way through the Australian desert. Mary and Peter find themselves alone in the Australian outback after a plane crash**, without any** knowlegde of how to find food in the desert .Their chances look bad until they meet a 16-year-old aboriginal boy.
He is on his walkabout **, an aboriginal tradition for a boy to become a man**.
:-) AstridDerPu
Schön, dass dir meine Antwort gefallen hat. Hoffentlich hilft's!
Danke für das Sternchen!
:-) AstridDerPu
...which turns a child into a man....
...without knowing how to find.....
Korrekturen:
between two children.... without knowledge ... a 16-year-old boy... a tradition which is supposed to change a child into a man(which makes a child a man).