Frage von KatyPerryLover, 44

sind in meinem englischen Blog noch fehler enthalten?

Hi Gandalfimous, you mentioned in your blog that the biggest economic and environmental problem is the massive consuming of oil. When the oil gets rarer and therefore the price will rise up, the “peak oil” will occur. In my opinion, it won’t be as fatal as you predict it. For instance, this problem has been recognized since a long time. However, we are still depended on oil and we have to change it sometimes in the future rapidly.

The main problem is exactly what you described: Our whole economy is based on oil products, like the gas for transportation or the plastic, which is a very important basic material. Hence, it is only depending on time when the oil runs out. Therefore, new power plants for renewable energy should be built these days because now we have the advantage that we can still use oil. Furthermore, we can activate these power station immediately after the construction has finished, so the environmental pollution goes down as well. Another significant advantage is that everyone can built their own small power plants at home, for example some solar panels on the roof or a little wind turbine in the garden.

Finally, I think everyone has the responsibility for the environment, so you should consider alternatives, like go by bike instead of using the car for short distances.

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch & Grammatik, 4

Hi Gandalfimous, you mentioned in your blog that the biggest

economic and environmental problem is the massive consuming (Wort) of oil. When
(---) oil gets rarer and therefore the price will rise (Zeit) (---), the “peak oil”
will occur. In my opinion, it won’t be as fatal as you predict (---). For instance, this problem has been recognized (Wort) since a long time (Ausdruck). However,
we are still depended on (Ausdruck) oil and we have to change it (Wort) sometimes (Wort) in the future .rapidly (Position)

The main problem is exactly what you described: Our whole economy is
based on oil products, like (---) gas for transportation or (---) plastic,
which is a very important basic material. Hence, it is only depending on
time when (---) oil runs out (Formulierung)
. Therefore, new power plants for renewable energy should be built these days (Ausdruck) because now we have the advantage that we can still use oil. Furthermore, we can activate these power station 
(Plural)
immediately after (---) construction has finished (Grammatik), so
(---) environmental pollution goes (Zeit) down as well. Another significant advantage is that everyone can built (Grammatik) their own small power plants at home, for example some solar panels on the roof or a little wind turbine in the garden.

Finally, I think everyone fhas the responsibility (Formulierung) for the environment,
so you should consider alternatives, like go by bike
(Ausdruck und Grammatik)
instead of using the car for short distances.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

Antwort
von haargott, 21

Man sagt nicht " massive consuming of oil" sondern "massive consumption of oil"

Kommentar von haargott ,

Es sind noch einige andere Fehler drin. soll ich die alle Ausbessern?

Kommentar von KatyPerryLover ,

ja,wäre nett

Kommentar von haargott ,

Passt ich helfe dir. Ich werde aber Satz für Satz ausbessern. Satz 2: Da passt die Formulierung nicht, so wie du jetzt heißt es ungefähr so: Wenn der Preis teurer wird, daher.. Also ergibt es so keinen Sinn.

Kommentar von haargott ,

Satz drei: ich glaub, as you predicted it. Wäre besser

Kommentar von haargott ,

Satz 4...this problem is known since a long time. For instance, passt da nicht.

Kommentar von haargott ,

Sind noch weiter Fehler drinnen aber ich hab jetzt keine Zeit. LG

Antwort
von DerTurnschuh, 16

Ich sehe keine Fehler / I don't see any mistakes :)

Antwort
von haargott, 16

Sind noch einige Fehler drinnen.

Antwort
von pixeldef, 10

Min 5 fehler im 1. Abschnitt. Keine rechtschreibfehler

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