Ist der Text Grammatisch in Ordnung? (Englisch)
Ich habe morgen Mündliche Abschluss Prüfung, und habe einen Text, den ich lernen möchte, ich möchte allerdings keine Grammatikfehler machen, deshalb möchte ich euch fragen, ob ihr Grammatikfehler im Text findet. Hi, i want to tell you something about me, My name is XXX, im XXX years old, and im in XXX grade at the XXXX I live in a little village in XXX, and my regular place is my room. In my room I have many shelves, a bed, 2 computers, a desk and a TV. And at home, all of my family have his own daily routines, for example my routine, Every day, my mum wakes me up at 6am. This is a bit early, but i should eat something and brush my theeth. When I am finished with all this, i go to the busstation in XXX, and wait for the bus. Then, the rest of the day, i will stay at school. Before i forget, i want to tell you something about my family. I have two sisters, my older sister is called XXX, she works as a specialist for application development at Dataport, her office is in XXX. My other sister is called XXX, she is in the last year of training as a attorney and notary clerk. Her office is in XXX. And we have a cat in our family. Her name is XXX, we don’t know how old she is, because she was strayed to us 5 or 6 years ago. But now, it was a good idea of her, to come to us. In my freetime i sometimes play with my cat. For example with a branch or with wool. But i do also other things in my free time, my favorite activity is jumping on my trampoline. I am every day on my trampoline, if it is sunny. Now, i want to tell you something about the Arguments in my family about school and pocket money. My parents say every day to me: “School is important, you have to learn more”, and i get annoyed, when i hear this sentences. My parents are sometimes very strict with me. And when i will learn every day, they give me a little bit pocket money every month. I got the double of money in the class, i am. For example, if i am in 6th grade, i will get 12 € or if i am in 10th grade, i will get 20€. But when i finished with school, i will get my own money. But the hook is, i dont know really what i want to be. But i have already a jobidea. A job as a specialist for system integration. Because i made a practical training in this job 2 months ago. But before i go in the world of jobs, i will do maybe another practical training. Mit freundlichen Grüßen Eselers
Ist dieser Text Grammatisch richtig?
Ich habe am Freitag Mündliche Abschluss Prüfung in Englisch, dafür soll ich 3-5 Minuten ohne Zettel etwas erzählen, den Text schreibe ich nur, um zu wissen, was ich sagen will. Jetzt möchte ich von euch wissen, ob der Text den ich bisher GRAMMATISCH richtig ist, Rechtschreibfehler sind dort egal, da ich es Mündlich machen muss. Hier mal der Text. Hi i want to tell you something about me, my family and my future plans My name is Julius im 15 years old, and i go in the 9th grade. I have 2 Sisters, and 1 cat. The names of my sisters are Sophie and Ines, my sister ines work as a spcecialist for application development, her deployment her location is in Altenholz at Dataport. My other sister Sophie, is in the last year of the training as a notary. My father work as a confectioner in Kiel. And my mother work as a florist in Revensdorf at Stegelmann. And every day my mother wakes me up at 6am. Because i should to eat something, and brush my teeths. After i finished all this, I go to the busstation, and wait for the bus. Then ill stay some hours in the school. And if the school ends, i go back home, and make my homework on my desk. Wenn ihr etwas gefunden habt, was nicht Grammatisch richtig ist, zitiert bitte die Stelle, und verbessert sie. Ich darf am Freitag kein Fehler machen. Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen.