Frage von nicoho, 20

Sätze korrekt?

Hallo, habe für eine Onlineübung für meinen Sohn einen englischen Text geschrieben. Ist der korrekt?

Let me tell you about our summer holidays, as we really had lots of fun. We usually had dinner in a nice italian restaurant every evening. One evening my parents didn't come with us, as they wanted to meet our neighbours at the bar to have a talk. Therefore we kids were on our own in the restaurant, when a long power breakdown happened suddenly. So we started telling horror stories, monster fairytales and jokes and had a really fantastic evening, which we absolutely want to repeat next year.

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von snapt, 6

Let me tell you about our summer holidays, as we really had lots of fun. We usually had dinner in a nice italian restaurant every evening. One evening my parents didn't come home with us, because they wanted to meet our neighbours at the bar to have a talk. So the kids went to the restaurant, but suddenly a long power failure happened. So we started telling horror stories, talked about monsters, fairytales and jokes and had a really fantastic evening, which we absolutely want to repeat next year.

Nur ein paar abenderungen ^^

Kommentar von earnest ,

-... dinner at an Italian restaurant

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von earnest, Community-Experte für Englisch & Grammatik, 3

Die Frage hattest du doch schon zwei Stunden zuvor gestellt - und ich hatte dir dort auch eine (verzögerte) Antwort gegeben ...

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