Richtige Grammatik?! (Englisch)

• Mit manu I where by the way 6x English champion at the Premier league, 2x English cup winner and even I win the Champions league…..to it came still many other titles… -> With manu I've been 6 times English champion at the Primier league, twice English cup winner and I even won the Champion's league... an still more titles have been added...

• Here you see a Picture -> Here is a picture

• Oh well it didn’t gave just good times … -> Oh well, I haven't always had good times...

• 1998 where sure - 1998 was probably

• Then became I in the World Championchip game against Argentinia a red Card….i had foul a player from argentinia…after he fouled me….but see self! - Then, in the World cHampionship match against Argentinia, I got a red card. I had fouled a player from Argentinia.. after he had fouled me... but see yourself!

• The worst thing at this action where what then happened -> The worst thing (at this action) was what happened next

• England lose the game - England lost the match

• Many Peoples make -> Many people

• but still I assign for -> I assigned

• Which a glory!!-> What a glory

• World Championchip Qualifikation 2001 - Qualification

• Yea England where so qualified for the -> Yeah, so England was qualified

• After this I become the title -> After this I got the title

• 2003 I getting even the “Order of british Empire” from the Queen -> In 2003 I even got [... by the queen

• Wooow this was been a very special -> that was a

• after I became the price! -> after I got the price

• 2006 in Germany I resign from the job as Captain -> I resigned

• is t now times for a new begin -> now it's time

• Now I’ll like to tell you ->I'd like

• Since the 4. juli 1999 married with -> Since 4th July 1999 I have been married to

• Here can you see -> here you can

• Here a Picture from us to -> Here, a picture of us, too.

• And since 2005 even my last Son is born -> and in 2005 my last son was born.

• the 5 years old Cruz -> five-year -old Cruz

• Also you see a Picture from him -> you may see a picture of him, too

• they are very important for my…even Importanter -> for me... even more important

• ooohhh damn! -> oohh damn it!

surly? -> surely

Have you now nothing to do? -> Haven't you got anything to do at the moment?

I’m 1,80 meter big and play right in the middle field. -> 1.80 meters tall ... my position in my football team is on the right in the midfield

I’m one the best shooters -> I'm one of the best shooters

I where born on 02. Mai 1975 in Leytonstone -> I was born....

Already as children I love it to play football. -> I loved playing football already as a child.

If where been all for my. ?????????? versteh gar nicht was du meinst!???

With 18 I signing my first professional contract by Manchester United. -> At 18 I signed...

Ohh ManU …it was been already my favourite club -> it has ever been my....

Here you see the Stadion and the logo from Manu. -> football statdium

Mit manu I where by the way 6x English champion at the Premier league, 2x English cup winner and even I win the Champions league…..to it came still many other titles… -> I have been English champion of the Premier league six times, twice English cup winner and I even won the Champions league.. and a lot of other titles

Here you see a Picture from me with the pokal. -> a picture of me with this cup

Oh well it didn’t gave just good times … -> Oh well, there were not only good times...

1998 where sure the darkest time in my football carrier. -> 1998 was... career

Then became I in the World Championchip game against Argentinia a red Card….i had foul a player from argentinia…after he fouled me….but see self! -> Then I got a red card.. I fouled a player from Argentinia after he had fouled me.. but see yourself

The worst thing at this action where what then happened… -> The worst of this action was what happened after...

okay... ich würds so schreiben (auch wenn ich manchmal nicht sicher bin, ob deins falsch ist, aber bei meiner lösung weiß ich, dass es richtig ist)

English footballer -> Englisch football player / Englisch soccer player

but you know that surly -> but I'm sure you know that

Do you want to have Autographs? -> Do you want to have an autograph? / Do you want to have some autographs?

...ohh sure you want. Here you have. -> ohh, sure you do. Here you go.

Have you now nothing to do? -> Don't you have anything to do?

im really pleasant! -> I'm really pleasant!

I’m 1,80 meter big -> I'm 1,80 meters tall / I'm 6 feet tall

In addition I’m one the best shooters in the world. -> I'm one of the best shooters / I'm the best shooter

And at my back stands -> on my back there is

I where born on 02. Mai -> I was born on 2nd May

Its a grat city! -> It's a great

Already as children I love it to play football -> Already as a child I loved/enjoyd to play football/soccer.

With 18 I signing -> I signed

it was been already -> It has already been

Here you see the Stadion -> Here you can see the stadion

If where been all for my. -> den Satz kapier ich nicht. was willst du sagen?(

ich mach grad weiter, sekunde^^)

sollen die handlungen auf deutsch bleiben? (also das in den sternchen)

http://www.kwick.de/Jaja_xD/mypage Hier der richtige link^^