Frage von elif300, 64

MSA Englisch mündlich Prüfung?

Ich habe morgen meine mündliche Prüfung im Fach Englisch. Ich habe schon einen kleinen Text vorbereitet doch es ist zu wenig. Ich muss etwas über mich erzählen 'about me' doh wie gesagt ist es zu wenig und ich habe eventuell auch Satzaufbau Fehler. Wäre schön wenn ihr mir helfen könntet:)

I want to tell you something about myself. My name is (Vorname/Nachname). I'm 16 years old and my birthday is on 06. June. I was born in Germany, Berlin. I have two brothers older than me. One of my Brothers called (Name) and is 20 years old and the other is (Name) and is 18 years old. I have many friends but my best friend is (Name) and is 17 years old. In my free time i going outside with friends or play piano. I go to school. My favorite subjects at school is English, sports, music and art. I come from Turkey from black sea. I would want to draw like even go there because a large part of my family lives there. My favorite color is bordo.

Antwort
von CatherineP, 40

Also, ich würde vielleicht einige kleine Dinge ändern:

I would like to tell you about myself. My name is...  I am ..... I was born ...  I have two brothers who are both older than me. My oldest brother is 20 years old and called ..., the other one is called ... and is 18 years old. I have many friends.... she is one year older than me. In my free time I like to go out with friends or to play the piano.

At school my favourite subjects are ....

I come from Turkey, from a village (town) near the Black Sea. I would love to ...(das Verb "draw" bedeutet "zeichnen" und macht in diesem Zusammenhang keinen Sinn) evtl. visit my home town because a large part of my family lives there.

My favourite colour is bordo.

Falls der Text länger sein muss, kannst Du ja ein bisschen mehr über Dein Klavierspiel, die Musik, die Du am liebsten spielst, den Sport, den Du am liebsten treibst schreiben.

Alles Gute.

Kommentar von elif300 ,

vielen vielen Dank :))

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