Frage von tonyalva23, 37

Morgen Klassenarbeit passt das (Englisch)?

Habe eine Email geschrieben passt das?

An Email

To: Uncle Carter From: Kev

Hello Uncle Carter, Long time no hear. Thank you very much for you email. How are you? How is your family?

Here in Vienna it is OK. I am very busy with the school. I have Lots of fun at school. At school i have: English, German, History, Maths, Biology, Music, Sports, social learning, Physics and Work Experience. I have two favourites Subjects maths and sport. But I'dont like German I don't know. At the moment we are learning about the First World War and the Secound World War. My classmates are very nice but I like more crazy classmates. In my Freetime I Usually go to workout.

Best wishes Kev.

Antwort
von SirWeiwel, 17

Du solltest vielleicht ein paar mehr Konrektoren zwischen den Sätzen einbringen, sonst hört sich das so abgehackt an. Zum Beispiel: And, Furthermore, Also, for example und so weiter. Falls Du keine guten kennst, Google einfach welche 😅👍🏻. Und bei der Einleitung heißt es „... youR e-mail..." Aber sonst ganz gut.

Antwort
von HotShotNights, 6

Hi :)

Also ich empfehle:

"Long time no see"

"Thanks for your e-mail"

"it's ok"

"i'm very busy with school" " i have a lot of fun"

"at school my topics are: english german history maths biology (..)"

"i don't know (why)"

"at the moment we've been learning all about the first and second world war"

"but at least i really like crazy classmates more"

"when i'm out of school i usually go to do some workout"

Alles nur Anregungen..viel Erfolg :)

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