Könnte mir jemand folgenden Text korrigieren?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Because of my interest in languages I considered where I could pass my BOGY-Praktikum. By research and recommendation of my English teacher, I have taken notice of your institution. After I caught up on your facility, I would like to pass my BOGY-Praktium at the DAI.
I have been learning English for four years at the XX- Gymnasium in XXX. The English language intrigues me and I enjoy if I have the opportunity, speaking English. Based on my interest on the English language I went to Bognor Regis in 2015 for a language holiday. I think this work placement is a good chance to get a deeper insight into the American culture. Besides I think about studying English after school.
At the time of my work place I visit the tenth class of the XX-Gymnasium in XXX and I am going to finish it in 2019.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Appendix Curriculum Vitae with a photo Copy of the last report Certificate of the school Cover letter in German
Ich mag ja die Stelle mit dem "intrigues me".... Thesaurus zu hülf!
Also am besten gehst du damit zu besagtem Englischlehrer und gehst das mit ihm nochmal durch. Da ist nämlich doch sehr viel Murks in dem Text.
Ein kurzer Tipp am Schluss: keep it simple.