Frage von hubi98, 14

könnte mir bitte jemad diesen englischen text kurz gegenlesen und korrigieren?

why are you only crying at the deaths at #parisattacks of people you don't know? i don't want to say that it's not horrible.
but what's about all the people dying in syria and iraq every day? isn't that horrible as well? you all are just crying because it happend next to your homecountry or next to your homecity. it only concerns you because of this fact. the war of syria every day is horrible as well, and nobody cares about the people over there. the USA and France just cares about killing the members of #isis, but only because they're a threat to THEM, not because they're a threat to the syrian people.
think about it.

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von goatysunshine, 14

Why are you only crying at the deaths of #parisattacks of people you don't know? I don't want to say that it's not horrible, but what about all the people dying in syria and iraq every day? Isn't that horrible as well? You all are just crying because it happend next to your homecountry or next to your hometown. It only concerns you because of its facts. The war of syria every day is horrible as well, and nobody cares about the people over there. The USA and France just care about killing the members of #isis, but only because they're a threat to THEM, not because they're a threat to the syrian people. Think about it.

Kommentar von hubi98 ,

haste was korrigiert? 😂

Kommentar von goatysunshine ,

Ja groß und kleinschreibung und es ist what about all.. nicht whats about all...

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