Frage von L1345, 15

Könnte jemand meinen Englischen Brief auf Grammatikfehler etc. korrigieren?

Dear Mum and Dad, how are you? I'm not fine. Now I am here for two days and it's not so nice. The first night was so cold that we sleeped in one bed. The beds are very hard and we have no sheets so it's every night very cold. Every day Miss Evans woke us at six o'clock. She pulls our blankets off the beds and shake ous awake. From our dormitory we can see the boys' dormitory and on the windows there are meatle bars. After we stand up a nurse whases ous with cold water. It's to cold. Also we can't talk our own language we have to speak English. But we can wear white dresses and shoes! I'm so angry for the tracker.............

Mum and Dad i'll go home to you it's so bad here.

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch & Grammatik, 15

Dear Mum and Dad,

how (RS) are you? I'm not fine. Now I am (Zeit) here for two days and it's not so nice. The first night was so cold that we sleeped (Grammar; unregelmäßiges Verb) in one bed. The beds are very hard and we have no sheets (Komma) so it's every night (Position) very cold.

Every day (Komma) Miss Evans woke (Zeit) us at six o'clock. She pulls our blankets off the beds and shake (Grammar) ous (RS) awake. From our dormitory (Komma) we can see the boys' dormitory and on the windows there are meatle (RS) bars.

After we stand up (Zeit) a nurse whases (RS) ous (RS) with cold water. It's to (RS) cold. Also (kein Satzanfang) we can't talk our own language (Ausdruck) (Komma) we have to speak English. But we can wear white dresses and shoes! I'm so angry for the tracker............. (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.)

Mum and Dad i'll (RS; will = werden, nicht wollen!) go home to you (Komma) it's so bad here.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Kommentar von L1345 ,

Könntest du die fehler auch korrigieren?

Also richtig hinschreiben?

Kommentar von AstridDerPu ,

Könnte ich schon, aber vom Abschreiben lernst du nichts!

Kommentar von L1345 ,

Kann man das so schreiben: I'm afraid of the tracker that he bring me in the "boob" because there you het only breat and water and the food here is also not the best

Kommentar von AstridDerPu ,

I'm afraid that the tracker bring (Grammar) me in (Präposition) the "boob" because there you het (Wort) only breat (RS) and water and the food here is (not) not the best either.

Kommentar von L1345 ,

I'm afraid that the tracker will bring me at the "boob"because there you get only breat and the food here is not the best either? Geht das so?

Kommentar von L1345 ,

Am schluss: ...and the food here is not the best it's often the samer 

Expertenantwort
von Bswss, Community-Experte für Englisch, 5

I have been here for two days

not very nice

we slept

Alles Weitere siehe Astrid!

Antwort
von Helidos, 12

"The first night was so cold that we sleeped in one bed" *slept 

*so every night it's/is very cold


*shakes us awake

*washes us

*it's too cold (es ist zu kalt) ich würde lieber 'it is so cold' ( es ist so kalt) nehmen

*in our own

* i want to come home

Das wäre erstmal alles was ich finden konnte

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