Frage von Bastibng, 35

Kann sie jemand mal das angucken?

hallo ich habe einen deuteschen text ins englische übersetzt kann sich jemand mal angucken ob ich es richtig gemacht habe unnd wenn möglich berichtigen ?

das ist er:The newspaper was the medium where by one most information and news could receive.Many people thought which is preserved the newspaper long and will never become less important.However, Phillip Meyer thought differently and he thinks in 2043 the last copy is printed because day by day more and more people use the Internet and thereby they must buy no more newspaper and thereby the newspaper becomes less important. The museum the 450 million incredible should remind cost of the newspaper, but she cannot stop, nevertheless, the development of the Internet. The researchers say 39 percent to look of the people around news and other things, the Internet want to use, and only 8 percent the newspaper.Rupert Murdoch made a speech in addition and said which today the people the news want fast around everything to knowledge because they want to meet if them with other people to talk about it what has happened so.

Expertenantwort
von AstridDerPu, Community-Experte für Englisch, 11

The newspaper was the medium where by one most information and news
could receive (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.)
. Many people thought which is preserved the newspaper long and will never become less important (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.). However, Phillip Meyer thought differently  (Komma) and he thinks in 2043 the last copy is printed (Zeit) because day by day (Position) more and more people use the Internet and thereby (Wort) they must buy no more newspaper  (Grammatik) and thereby  (s.o.) the newspaper becomes less important.

The museum the 450 million incredible should remind cost of the newspaper,
but she (wer?) cannot stop, nevertheless, the development of the Internet. (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.)

(---) researchers say 39 percent to look of the people around news and other
things, the Internet want to use, and only 8 percent the
newspaper
(Das ergibt keinen Sinn.).

Rupert Murdoch made a speech in addition  (Position) and said which today
the people the news want fast around everything to knowledge because
they want to meet if them with other people to talk about it what has
happened so. (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden bzw. muss der Text komplett neu geschrieben werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com, für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!.

AstridDerPu

Kommentar von Bastibng ,

The Museum
that costed 450 million dollars was supposed to remind of the newspaper,
but it could not stop the development of the Internet. das ist das mit museum ist das richtig?

Kommentar von AstridDerPu ,

Nein, dieser Satz ist nicht richtig.

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