kann mir jemand sagen, ob das eine gute summary wäre?
Hallo, ich schreibe morgen meine erste eglischklausur und wollte fragen, ob mir jemand sagen kann, ob das hier eine gute Summary wäre oder was ich noch verbessern könnte.
Hier noch der Link zum Text, über den ich die summary geschrieben habe : http://www.ogtprep.com/readings/reading8.htm
Summary
The short story „Early Autumn“ by Langston Hughes (1902-1967) is about a man, called Bill and a woman named Mary. Bill and Mary were in love wehne they were young. At that time Mary left Bill for another man but now they meet again. They talk to each other and Mary narrats that she lives in New York, too. She tells about her family and her job but she seems to be frustradet and unhappy with her life. On the other hand Bill seems to be very content. He tells about his new wife and his two kids. In Bill's eyes Mary looks very old, but he does not tell her. They invite each other to visit and at the end, when Mary's bus arrives, Mary wants to say goodbye with a kiss but Bill only held his hand out. When Mary is in the bus, she remembers that they forgot to swich the addresses.
danke im vorraus
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Ohne den Originaltext gelesen zu haben, finde ich Deine Zusammenfassung ziemlich gut.
Du kannst beruhigt in die Klausur gehen.
Ich drücke Dir die Daumen (:o) -
sehr gut gemacht:) nur zwei kleinigkeiten:
"frustradet" mit "d" am ende
anstatt "kids" "children"
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Bill and Mary were in love wehne they were young.
wehne <- falsch :) flüchtigkeitsfehler. ;)
aber so auf den ersten blick find ichs ganz gut :)
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super, dankeschön (: hoffe, es klappt alles :b