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Dear class 9a, Today i want to tell you somethinng about London, Now i want to show you my structure for the presentation. At first i want to tell you general over london. After that i show you some sights. Now I come to the general over london London is the capital of England. London is one of the famous cities in the world In London live 8 million people, and more than twenty-five million Tourist visit London every year. London is 1,572 square kilometers. In London speak the people Englisch. Now I begin with the second part
In London can you see many wonderful sights. Here a few of these sights:
Big Ben The Big Ben is the monument of London. The bell weighs thirteen a half tons; it's the largest bell all over the world. Big Ben hangs in a tower which is 97 meters high.
Tower Bridge t’s a bridge across the Thames (75km) and at the top of the Tower Bridge is a museum The Tower bridge ist he famous bridge in Europe and was built in 1894. he bridge is 244 meters long an 43 meters hight. Madame Toussouds Madame Tussaud`s is a famous wax. It is one of the most popular museums in London. There are figures made out wax look like realpersons. It has over 300 wax Figures.
London eye It’s the biggest wheel of Great Britain and you can sit in it and you can see London of another version.
The wheel spins slowly and takes for a turn about 30-40 minutes. All in All the London Eye transports up to 800 passengers per turn.
In London can you see many wonderful sights. 🔙Falsch
In London you can see Land wonderful sights.🔙 Richtig
You can See many wonderful sights in London.🔙 Am Besten