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Between the forties and fifties the Communists fear, hysteria and
paranoia (Wendung)
was rampant in the United States. (---) people had wanted (Zeit) to prevent a great (= großartig) fear of the red danger (Hier fehlt etwas.) its takeover by all meansdue to events (Komma) such as the first Russian atomic bomb (Eine Bombe ist kein event), the Communist takeover in China and the proxy war in Korea. First only single people was (Grammatik) accused by (---) conservative politicians. These (Wort) were immigrants, intellectual (Grammar) ,
scientists, artists and trade unionists. Even Hollywood stars like
Charlie Chaplin and writers (Komma) such as Arthur Miller were regarded with
much suspicion. Later, thousands were accused of spying and
collaboration and some of them sentenced to tough penalties.

The hitherto unknown Senator Joseph McCarthy during the 1950 Senate race
much on because he maintained a list of names with 205 name (Grammatik) alleged communist spies within the American foreign mine own Ministry.
- (Dieser Satz ergibt keinen Sinn. Es fehlt mindestens 1 Verb. Außerdem passt die Satzstellung nicht)

He became chairman of the Senate Committee for the determination of un-American
machinations. This position he used consistently as an instrument of
power and became the driving force in the hunt for Communists. (Mit dieser Satzstellung wird This position besonders betont. I.d.R. ist die Satzstellung S - P - O) He led many interrogations which led (Wiederholung) to nothing, (neuer Satz) his scenario campaign of character assassination were (Grammatik) however successful.

Edward R. Murrow, a television journalist and presenter of the popular CBS-format "See It Now" (Komma) for the first time (Position) dared to ask (Wort) the demagogic methods and the unfair practices of political rule persecution publicly questioned (doppelt-gemoppelt). (Der Satz ergibt keinen Sinn.)  

Its first report on McCarthy he radiated 1953rd (Wort). - (Der Satz ergibt keinen Sinn. Satzstellung)

In order to do a special with the amount (Wort) "A Report on Senator McCarthy" (Komma) which should be broadcast on March 9, 1954 to draw attention, he switched (Wort) and his fellow private show in the most famous newspapers of America. - (Dieser Satz ergibt keinen Sinn.)

In the broadcast (Komma) McCarthy was unmasked by his own statements. She (Grammatik) had sensational ratings and attracted a flood of letters to the editor by itself (Wendung) . The senator responded to the report by the lies spread Court also Murrow was a communist. But it was already too late in the same year was McCarthy
from the state expressed the distrust. (Dieser Satz ergibt keinen Sinn.)

The political climate had changed and McCarthy fell quickly and deeply. he (RS) became an alcoholic and died already (Wort) in 1957 with only 47 years from cirrhosis. (Satzstellung) Murrow but became a legend of American political journalism. (Satzstellung) 

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Kommentar von noah17081997
09.01.2016, 14:02

Danke für deine Hilfe. Was meinst du im ersten Satz mit Wendung?

Und warum ist die Fertigstellung einer Atombombe keine Ereignis?

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Ich habe meinen Text mal mithilfe deiner Tipps überarbeitet. Ich fände es klasse wenn da noch mal jemand drüber schauen könnte :)

The McCarthy-Era

Between the forties and fifties was the fear angainst communism universally in the United States. The people apprehended the takeover off the red Menace which they want prevent by all means. This fear was strengthened by event, such as the first Russian atomic bomb, the Communist takeover in China and the proxy war in Korea. Initial only individual persons was accused. There were immigrants, intellectuals, scientists, artists and trade unionists. Even Hollywood stars like Charlie Chaplin and writers, such as Arthur Miller were regarded with much suspicion. Later, thousands were accused of spying and
collaboration and some of them sentenced to tough penalties.

The hitherto unknown Senator Joseph McCarthy attracted attention during the 1950 senate election by assert he has a list with names from 205 communist spies within the american foreign ministry. He became chairman of the Senate Committee for the determination of un-American machinations. He used this position consistently as an instrument of power and became the driving force in the hunt for Communists. He performed many interrogations which led to nothing. His smear campaign were however succesful.

Edward R. Murrow, a television journalist and presenter of the popular CBS-format "See It Now", dared for the first time to scrutinize the demagogic methods and the unfair practices of political rule persecution. His first report on McCarthy was aired in 1953. In order to draw attention for a special with the contribution "A Report on Senator McCarthy", which should be broadcast on March 9, 1954 he and his proponents advertised in the most famous newspapers of America. In the broadcast, McCarthy was unmasked by his own statements. The broadcast had sensational ratings and attracted a flood of letters to the editor. The senator responded to the report by the lies spread Court also Murrow was a communist. But it was to late. In the same year the senat pronounce McCarthy its distrust. The political climate had changed and McCarthy fell quickly and deeply. He became an alcoholic and died soon in 1957 from cirrhosis with only 47 years. Murrow however became a legend of American political journalism.

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