Kann jemand meine Englischen Texte korrigieren das ist sehr wichtig!?
Katharine Hamnett is an Eco- designer from Great Britain. Katharine had a well-travelled upbringing, settling in London to study fashion design. In 1969, Katharine graduated from Central Saint Martins School of Art, by the age of twenty-one, Katharine had set up business. In 2003 she went to Mali to vistit cotton farmers to promote Fair Trad. She won the first British Fashion award and Queen Elizabeth 2 named her a commander of the order of the British Empire. In 1984 Katharine received the Designer of the year award She wanted to have Revolution without breaking a single window and to boycott Benetton. An other campaign was to stop GM. The political problems were the poverty of cotton farmers and that they live in the „developing world“. And that only less people buy cotton clothing. She wanted to show that cotton can look and feel as good as conventional cotton. Katharine has introduced many innovations into the clothing and textile business, instigated new styles and trends in fashion.
Angelina Jolie Angelina Jolie is an American actress and professional model. She played in the movie „Tomb Raider“ filmed in Cambodia. While filming the movie she first become personally aware of worldwide humanitarian crises. Also, she wrote a book called „Notes from my travels“. Her campaigns are that she visited earthquake victims in Haiti and she founded Jolie-Pitt Foundation. She began lobbying humanitarian interest in the U.S. captial, she took time to help with the clean streets projects and she traveled to refugee camps. Furthermore she donated $1 million to Doctors without bordes and to Afghan refugees. She arranged a deal with people magazin, to print the first picture showing her visibly pregnant in exchange for $500,000 to charity. In 2006 she donated more than $8 million with Brad Pitt. The political problems were dirty street, rural poverty and natural disasters. She gets the first world award given out by the Untited Nations Correspondents Association. She was awarded the Global Humanitarian Award and for her conservation work in the country.
man merkt genau, welche Stellen / Sätze du im Internet abgeschrieben und welche du selbst formuliert hast.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
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1.benutze ich nur pons!! 2. Bringt ich so eine grammatik seite auch nicht weiter und nur die fehler zu makieren würde mir auch weiterhelfen
Du meinst: die Mischung aus Abgekupfertem und eigenem Versuch?
Nein, L123456, so läuft das hier nicht.
Wegen Abkupferns haben hierzulande schon Minister ihr Amt verloren.
Wenn ihr mir doch wenigstens die fehler sagen könnt...
Zu faul. Sry